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Catch Me When I Fall

As I stare to where the sun comes up beauty lies ahead mixing with the daffodils and the roses in her bed I breathe in all her glory as she fills into my soul living through her paradise and all that life bestows Step in through my window enter my faded walls caress my effervescence and catch me when I fall

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/1/2017 8:46:00 PM

What a beautiful poem....

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/20/2017 9:57:00 PM

Hi Tim, your thoughts are beautifully worded in this lovely poem! 'Caress my effervescence' is some sweet imagery. I totally enjoyed your poem :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2017 3:44:00 PM

- A glory to read, Tim :) - Beautiful - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/18/2017 7:16:00 PM

After what I have been through, I hope to have these feelings! :)

Darren White

Date: 8/18/2017 8:09:00 AM

Wonderful Tim, so beautifully written.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/18/2017 7:33:00 AM

Wonderful rhyme, Tim, refreshing:)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/18/2017 2:46:00 AM

Wonderful Poem, Tim, I'll catch you if I'm able... beautiful and romantic ~*

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/17/2017 4:58:00 PM

This is a special write my friend! A romantic you are at heart aren't you Tim? What a glorious poem you have written here this morning! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!