Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Catch Me When I Fall

As I stare to where the sun comes up 
beauty lies ahead
mixing with the daffodils and 
the roses in her bed

I breathe in all her glory 
as she fills into my soul
living through her paradise and 
all that life bestows

Step in through my window
enter my faded walls 
caress my effervescence and
catch me when I fall

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Pashang Salehi September 1, 2017 at 8:46 PM What a beautiful poem....

Susan Ashley August 20, 2017 at 9:57 PM Hi Tim, your thoughts are beautifully worded in this lovely poem! 'Caress my effervescence' is some sweet imagery. I totally enjoyed your poem :)

Anne-Lise Andresen August 19, 2017 at 3:44 PM - A glory to read, Tim :) - Beautiful - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso August 18, 2017 at 7:16 PM After what I have been through, I hope to have these feelings! :)

Darren White August 18, 2017 at 8:09 AM Wonderful Tim, so beautifully written.

Joanna Daniel August 18, 2017 at 7:33 AM Wonderful rhyme, Tim, refreshing:)

Eve Roper August 18, 2017 at 2:46 AM Wonderful Poem, Tim, I'll catch you if I'm able... beautiful and romantic ~*

Russell Sivey August 17, 2017 at 4:58 PM This is a special write my friend! A romantic you are at heart aren't you Tim? What a glorious poem you have written here this morning! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Lin Lane August 17, 2017 at 4:44 PM With this kind of love offered, no one should ever fall. Sweet write, Tim.

Dean Wood August 17, 2017 at 3:58 PM I hate morning people! Seriously Tim, this is wonderful. I would wake up to this every day if possible. Dean

Akkina Downing August 17, 2017 at 2:29 PM Enchantingly beautiful :)

Connie Marcum Wong August 17, 2017 at 2:22 PM I love this Tim! Isn't it wonderful how we poets inspire each other? : )

Vijay Pandit August 17, 2017 at 12:20 PM Well executed--good theme--well done Tim!

Heidi Sands August 17, 2017 at 10:40 AM It is so very nice! I am happy to see the rest of it here, from what I saw in your beautiful comment. A favorite :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 17, 2017 at 10:39 AM This is gorgeous Tim :)

Jan Allison August 17, 2017 at 10:36 AM oh you are taking over from Chris with beautiful romantic morning poems Tim:-) a joy to read:-) hugs jan xx