Catch Me When I Fall

As I stare to where the sun comes up 
beauty lies ahead
mixing with the daffodils and 
the roses in her bed

I breathe in all her glory 
as she fills into my soul
living through her paradise and 
all that life bestows

Step in through my window
enter my faded walls 
caress my effervescence and
catch me when I fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/1/2017 8:46:00 PM
What a beautiful poem....
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:57:00 PM
Hi Tim, your thoughts are beautifully worded in this lovely poem! 'Caress my effervescence' is some sweet imagery. I totally enjoyed your poem :)
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Date: 8/19/2017 3:44:00 PM
- A glory to read, Tim :) - Beautiful - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/18/2017 7:16:00 PM
After what I have been through, I hope to have these feelings! :)
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Date: 8/18/2017 8:09:00 AM
Wonderful Tim, so beautifully written.
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Date: 8/18/2017 7:33:00 AM
Wonderful rhyme, Tim, refreshing:)
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Date: 8/18/2017 2:46:00 AM
Wonderful Poem, Tim, I'll catch you if I'm able... beautiful and romantic ~*
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:58:00 PM
This is a special write my friend! A romantic you are at heart aren't you Tim? What a glorious poem you have written here this morning! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:44:00 PM
With this kind of love offered, no one should ever fall. Sweet write, Tim.
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Date: 8/17/2017 3:58:00 PM
I hate morning people! Seriously Tim, this is wonderful. I would wake up to this every day if possible. Dean
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Date: 8/17/2017 2:29:00 PM
Enchantingly beautiful :)
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Date: 8/17/2017 2:22:00 PM
I love this Tim! Isn't it wonderful how we poets inspire each other? : )
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Date: 8/17/2017 12:20:00 PM
Well executed--good theme--well done Tim!
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Date: 8/17/2017 10:40:00 AM
It is so very nice! I am happy to see the rest of it here, from what I saw in your beautiful comment. A favorite :)
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Date: 8/17/2017 10:39:00 AM
This is gorgeous Tim :)
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Date: 8/17/2017 10:36:00 AM
oh you are taking over from Chris with beautiful romantic morning poems Tim:-) a joy to read:-) hugs jan xx
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