Catch a Ride On a Comet

Catch a ride on the tail of a comet
   Breakneck speed: Hold on to your bonnet!

Dodge bits and pieces of space-debris
   Obstacle course on the celestial sea

See the planets as they orbit the sun
   Venus, Mars, Jupiter -- watch Mercury run

View constellations like Antares and Polaris
   Swoop past Alpha Centauri, Andromeda and Sirius

Wouldn't it be marvelous to actually do this?
   To fly 'round the heavens -- ecstasy's bliss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/4/2018 11:52:00 PM
Joyous romp through whimsical rhyme - nicely done! :-)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/5/2018 2:48:00 PM
Next ride leaves in a twinkle of a solar system. All aboard... TYSM, Gregory! Best always, gw
Date: 10/3/2018 9:23:00 AM
I love it! Reminiscent of The Little Prince (a huge fan, even got the tattoo;) Lovely to read you this morning my favourite Wolfman <3 xomo!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/5/2018 2:47:00 PM
And thank you, my favorite Australian!! :) gw
Date: 10/3/2018 12:22:00 AM
To boldly go, enjoyed this Gershon, who knows one day. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/3/2018 8:36:00 AM
Miracles happen every day; the impossible takes a little longer... ~ gw
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