Cataract

where did we go wrong-

waterfalls of wistfulness,

hearts frozen in time




Inspired by latest  Raul's photo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gorelick Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 2:28 PM
The picture does inspire a kind of wistfulness..well done Mr Strand..from an admirer..smile BG
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 1:27 PM
GREAT one! HOpe you place. Andrea
Brown Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 11:26 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Brian. Please keep writing and sharing with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
Pickett Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 7:41 AM
Wonderful haiku friend.... Good work....:JP]
A  Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 6:22 AM
Very lovely Haiku. Intresting broken love. Enjoyed reading this morning...IRMA
Sweetheart Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 5:14 AM
Wonderful entry and good luck Brian.. a great Haiku patterned against LOVE.. intriguing..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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