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where did we go wrong- waterfalls of wistfulness, hearts frozen in time Inspired by latest Raul's photo

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Date: 2/24/2010 2:28:00 PM
The picture does inspire a kind of wistfulness..well done Mr Strand..from an admirer..smile BG
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Date: 2/24/2010 1:27:00 PM
GREAT one! HOpe you place. Andrea
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Date: 2/24/2010 11:26:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Brian. Please keep writing and sharing with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you the best in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2010 7:41:00 AM
Wonderful haiku friend.... Good work....:JP]
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Date: 2/24/2010 6:22:00 AM
Very lovely Haiku. Intresting broken love. Enjoyed reading this morning...IRMA
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Date: 2/24/2010 5:14:00 AM
Wonderful entry and good luck Brian.. a great Haiku patterned against LOVE.. intriguing..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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