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Catacombs in Siracusa, Sicily. They are the second largest catacombs in ...

Catacombs of Fear

catacombs of fear
     lost in my own illusion 
          a downward spiral
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July 22, 2025 at 8:12 AM
Excellent senryu Bill ~ some downward spirals help to lead us out of the illusion as well.
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July 22, 2025 at 10:54 AM
That's true, P.M., There's often a good and bad side to most things. Thanks for the thoughtful comments. Have a great week! Bill
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July 21, 2025 at 4:41 PM
wow, this senyru is powerful and magnificent and quietly speaks to what fuels our downward spirals. Wish I could fave this one 'cause it speaks to me. hugs
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July 22, 2025 at 10:55 AM
Thank you, my Sara, your supportive comments are always encouraging. Love, Bill
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