Catacombs of Fear

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Catacombs in Siracusa, Sicily. They are the second largest catacombs in ...

catacombs of fear lost in my own illusion a downward spiral

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P.M. Richter

Date: 7/22/2025 8:12:00 AM

Excellent senryu Bill ~ some downward spirals help to lead us out of the illusion as well.

Bill Baker
Date: 7/22/2025 10:54:00 AM

That's true, P.M., There's often a good and bad side to most things. Thanks for the thoughtful comments. Have a great week! Bill

Sara Baker

Date: 7/21/2025 4:41:00 PM

wow, this senyru is powerful and magnificent and quietly speaks to what fuels our downward spirals. Wish I could fave this one 'cause it speaks to me. hugs

Bill Baker
Date: 7/22/2025 10:55:00 AM

Thank you, my Sara, your supportive comments are always encouraging. Love, Bill