Cat On My Lap

A cat sat on my lap and I couldn't get up
Although I had to pee
And my knees were achy

As a cat relaxes, she gets heavier 
and her bones melt away
In her sleep she twitches

Time was passing and I had an itch
It was getting dark and I was late
But still I had to wait

And she ran and ran through her dreams
Chasing small creatures above and below
Breathing faster in her sleep

I guess I can sit a while longer
When she stretches I will not linger
I will move at last but my foot is numb

Then a door slams and she leaps
Scratching my thighs without care
Off she goes to the food bowl

Why didn't I at first gently remove her
Now I think about punting her over 
The fence though it passes

How can I stay mad at those deep blue eyes
Those white paws and fur like silk
Her wild and clever ways

Until the next time when my lap is her bed
And she runs and runs again
Through all of her many lives and too few days

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Date: 1/14/2021 5:38:00 PM
"...many lives and too few days." It puts me in mind of a looming, threatening ceiling. Very "Citizen Kane"-y of you, there. So where's the Rose, bud? Well written piece, if not a Tad "too" de-pressing. You should "Put some levity back into this life...", believe me, it's just a pinch,"...there'll be no more, AHHHHHH!". Anywho, salut.
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Date: 11/30/2020 6:55:00 AM
Well written poem Jon..
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