Cat Fight

a peaceful silence shattered by raucous discord --- two cats fight

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Robert Pettit

Date: 12/20/2011 4:56:00 PM

We had a cat years ago who got involved in an altercation with another feline just about every night. He would come home all scratched up with his ears chewed on. Your haiku has described this nocturnal sound annoyance very well.

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/6/2011 11:15:00 AM

It's natural, you caught it nicely. Thanks, my friend. bl

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 12/5/2011 7:15:00 AM

you definitely captured the noise here! now how do i get it out of my head???

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2011 4:13:00 PM

This is GREAT modern haiku, Kim. Let me go see the other one.

Jack Horne

Date: 12/4/2011 3:23:00 PM

LOL, yes, I can see/hear this one! Many congrats to you too, my friend : )