Cat Fight

a peaceful silence
                                              shattered by raucous discord ---
                                                        two cats fight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 4:56 PM
We had a cat years ago who got involved in an altercation with another feline just about every night. He would come home all scratched up with his ears chewed on. Your haiku has described this nocturnal sound annoyance very well.
Devnath  Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 11:15 AM
It's natural, you caught it nicely. Thanks, my friend. bl
Susan Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 7:15 AM
you definitely captured the noise here! now how do i get it out of my head???
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 4:13 PM
This is GREAT modern haiku, Kim. Let me go see the other one.
Horne Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 3:23 PM
LOL, yes, I can see/hear this one! Many congrats to you too, my friend : )
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