Cat Dreams

Dear Kitty, with small paws tucked underneath your furry chest – I watch you slumbering. Instinctively, your sweet eyes open wide as I lean in to study eyes flecked gold with oval slits. I watch you watching ME! I wonder can you see me. Am I just a shadow figure? Do you see me gray? Or in this room with sunlight streaming in, am I as vivid as the very hue in which I’m viewing YOU, sweet pet of mine? With me inside this room, you have no fear. But when you dream, perhaps you wander plains of ancient Egypt or of Africa, and catching sight of me inside your dream, you flee, to prowl through ghostly reeds where howls of predators – coyotes, jackals, wolves - are shattering the stillness of the night. Do you then creep into a secret place to later waken to an orb of gold that shines above you as you run to play with your cub companions, tumbling in the grass? Then in the arid heat of afternoon, do you lie down and tuck your lion paws beneath your chest and doze off, dreaming of a distant space much smaller where there looms a strange new species? And among it there is one who meets your needs by bringing you strange food spooned from a can and also grooms your coat and keeps you safe and someone who most curiously, watches as you sleep! 12/20/16 for Broken Wing's Form B Poetry Contest
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Hagy Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 2:18 PM
Love this!! How clever...love the last verse! I'll try to post new write today (it will actually be an old write though):)
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 1, 2017 at 6:51 PM
I love this poem you wrote.I was engrossed reading your poem. I enjoyed it. Happy New Year.
Allison Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 9:11 PM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Nusker Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 11:03 PM
Andrea, I'm curious to know, are you hinting a cat's association with the alien world in this poem? As there is quite a hype about it. Lol. Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem.
Krampe Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 8:06 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. I enjoyed your poem very much; I am often wondering what my cat dreams of.
Roper Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 7:59 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win. Have a Happy New Year’s and all your wishes come true… and don’t forget to eat those Black-eyed peas :) Hugs Eve
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Constance should love this Andrea. I adore cats and sure do miss ours. Outstanding! ; ) 7
Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 8:45 AM
Adorable. Merry Christmas Andrea. Hugs Rick.
Roper Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 8:37 PM
Andrea, I love the thoughts while you're watching your cat. good luck in the contest Hugs
Horn Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 6:28 PM
AD, We have two orange/gold tabbies we love so much. They are eight years old now. Jim Horn
Duncan Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Love it ,,,, and Merry Christmas to you :) My computer is dead so I haven't been on.
Onclaud Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 1:07 PM
ohh, sweet feline thoughts, andie.. love this!,,soupie
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 12:40 PM
Excellent creativity this poem is, Andrea. Even an ole catdog like me can appreciate a true cat poem. Nice piece of poetry. Love and joy to you.
White Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 12:24 PM
So wonderful, it's such a true 'catty' poem :) Since a few weeks I live with my sister, and she has 4 Maine Coon! I know a lot about cats suddenly! Good luck in the contest.
Kannan Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 7:57 AM
So cute ... Beautifully done...Thanks for sharing... Good luck with the contest... A big 7...
Kendrick Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 5:57 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative cat poem..It reads like winning material to me..Way to go..Great imagination in writing it..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest and thanks for visiting my poem to comment..Sara
Allison Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 3:13 PM
Awd so cute and I know Constance will love it!:-) HUGS JAN XX
Salehi Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 2:10 PM
I know they dream and their dream is how to have more love.... Nice Andrea ... Merry Christmas and happy new year... Pashang
Walker Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Never thought what a cat is dreaming, however, not only shall I imagine such things but hopefully see such wonderful images as you have again, painted in my mind.
Smith Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 8:31 AM
The wonders of a cat's mind...We will never know.
Turner Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 7:58 AM
A sweet write Andrea. Wish I were a cat person:) Good luck!
Daniel Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 7:58 AM
Amazing, what an imagination! Constance will love this, Andrea:)
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