Cat Dreams

Dear Kitty, with small paws tucked underneath your furry chest – I watch you slumbering. Instinctively, your sweet eyes open wide as I lean in to study eyes flecked gold with oval slits. I watch you watching ME! I wonder can you see me. Am I just a shadow figure? Do you see me gray? Or in this room with sunlight streaming in, am I as vivid as the very hue in which I’m viewing YOU, sweet pet of mine? With me inside this room, you have no fear. But when you dream, perhaps you wander plains of ancient Egypt or of Africa, and catching sight of me inside your dream, you flee, to prowl through ghostly reeds where howls of predators – coyotes, jackals, wolves - are shattering the stillness of the night. Do you then creep into a secret place to later waken to an orb of gold that shines above you as you run to play with your cub companions, tumbling in the grass? Then in the arid heat of afternoon, do you lie down and tuck your lion paws beneath your chest and doze off, dreaming of a distant space much smaller where there looms a strange new species? And among it there is one who meets your needs by bringing you strange food spooned from a can and also grooms your coat and keeps you safe and someone who most curiously, watches as you sleep! 12/20/16 for Broken Wing's Form B Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/3/2017 2:18:00 PM
Love this!! How clever...love the last verse! I'll try to post new write today (it will actually be an old write though):)
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Date: 1/1/2017 6:51:00 PM
I love this poem you wrote.I was engrossed reading your poem. I enjoyed it. Happy New Year.
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Date: 12/30/2016 9:11:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/29/2016 11:03:00 PM
Andrea, I'm curious to know, are you hinting a cat's association with the alien world in this poem? As there is quite a hype about it. Lol. Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem.
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Date: 12/29/2016 8:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. I enjoyed your poem very much; I am often wondering what my cat dreams of.
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Date: 12/29/2016 7:59:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win. Have a Happy New Year’s and all your wishes come true… and don’t forget to eat those Black-eyed peas :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/24/2016 12:00:00 AM
Constance should love this Andrea. I adore cats and sure do miss ours. Outstanding! ; ) 7
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Date: 12/23/2016 8:45:00 AM
Adorable. Merry Christmas Andrea. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 12/22/2016 8:37:00 PM
Andrea, I love the thoughts while you're watching your cat. good luck in the contest Hugs
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Date: 12/22/2016 6:28:00 PM
AD, We have two orange/gold tabbies we love so much. They are eight years old now. Jim Horn
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Date: 12/22/2016 5:39:00 PM
Love it ,,,, and Merry Christmas to you :) My computer is dead so I haven't been on.
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Date: 12/22/2016 1:07:00 PM
ohh, sweet feline thoughts, andie.. love this!,,soupie
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Date: 12/22/2016 12:40:00 PM
Excellent creativity this poem is, Andrea. Even an ole catdog like me can appreciate a true cat poem. Nice piece of poetry. Love and joy to you.
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Date: 12/22/2016 12:24:00 PM
So wonderful, it's such a true 'catty' poem :) Since a few weeks I live with my sister, and she has 4 Maine Coon! I know a lot about cats suddenly! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/22/2016 7:57:00 AM
So cute ... Beautifully done...Thanks for sharing... Good luck with the contest... A big 7...
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Date: 12/21/2016 5:57:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative cat poem..It reads like winning material to me..Way to go..Great imagination in writing it..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest and thanks for visiting my poem to comment..Sara
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Date: 12/21/2016 3:13:00 PM
Awd so cute and I know Constance will love it!:-) HUGS JAN XX
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Date: 12/21/2016 2:10:00 PM
I know they dream and their dream is how to have more love.... Nice Andrea ... Merry Christmas and happy new year... Pashang
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Date: 12/21/2016 9:11:00 AM
Never thought what a cat is dreaming, however, not only shall I imagine such things but hopefully see such wonderful images as you have again, painted in my mind.
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Date: 12/21/2016 8:31:00 AM
The wonders of a cat's mind...We will never know.
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Date: 12/21/2016 7:58:00 AM
Amazing, what an imagination! Constance will love this, Andrea:)
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Date: 12/21/2016 7:58:00 AM
A sweet write Andrea. Wish I were a cat person:) Good luck!
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