CayCay Godwin Poet Senryu

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Cat Bath Hiku

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               thorough bathing
        our cat does daily perform ~
              licks sons hair clean

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Ron VanHooser August 25, 2025 at 12:22 PM CayCay, I needed a smile this Monday and your hiku did it. You really brightened my day! Thank you! Great hiku! Ron

Gershon Wolf June 14, 2025 at 8:57 PM Had to laugh at this one. Caught me by surprise. ~ Harry Nomore CayCay Godwin June 15, 2025 at 1:31 AM Should you desire a video of preciousness in action, I'll send one for $9.99. Don't know if you know traits of Siamese cats, they're more dog than feline in nature; heel, fetch, MUST be included in all things family, extremely talkative and too (!) intelligent. Raja is my 3rd Siamese joy-love. He really does bath Kyle's hair, dedicates minimum of 10-minutes to the act. So cute ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich March 23, 2025 at 9:36 AM this is a cute one. soupmail for you

Daniel Henry Rodgers March 21, 2025 at 5:46 AM O' Dear CayCay, What a heart warming scene. I am sure your son loves the cat licking him. My sister sent a video of my 92 year old mom asleep in bed with the dog in bed with her and licking her arm. So dear!! I just loved your poem because I loved the unconditional love of animals such as cats and dogs. Spring Blessings, my Dear Friend, Daniel

Hiba Junaid March 21, 2025 at 3:29 AM Ah this is a light and fun one! I love cats so, so much. Now I'm not a felinologist or a fellow cat by any means, but in my extremely (un)professional opinion, your cat loves your son. I'd give him/her extra cuddles for that alone. Hugs, Hiba.

Gershon Wolf March 20, 2025 at 9:06 PM This is like 'sweet and soar in one swipe'n'lick!' lol. ~ gw

Paige Hind March 20, 2025 at 8:45 PM Aw, sweet! <3

Phyllis Babcock March 20, 2025 at 7:09 PM That sounds like a cat. Our son has two cats and when they go on holidays we watch them. Never had a cat bath lol. Nice fun write. love phyl

Paula Goldsmith March 20, 2025 at 12:27 PM I enjoyed reading your fun "Cat Bath" write. I had cats as a kid but none now. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away...........

Tom Cunningham March 20, 2025 at 11:51 AM Lol, you cant get any cleaner than that. Hope your week is going well CayCay. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2025 at 10:50 AM - A real cat bath, CayCay :) - Cute haiku :) - hugs