Cat Bath Hiku


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               thorough bathing
        our cat does daily perform ~
              licks sons hair clean

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Ron VanHooser

Date: 8/25/2025 12:22:00 PM

CayCay, I needed a smile this Monday and your hiku did it. You really brightened my day! Thank you! Great hiku! Ron

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/14/2025 8:57:00 PM

Had to laugh at this one. Caught me by surprise. ~ Harry Nomore

CayCay Jennings
Date: 6/15/2025 1:31:00 AM

Should you desire a video of preciousness in action, I'll send one for $9.99. Don't know if you know traits of Siamese cats, they're more dog than feline in nature; heel, fetch, MUST be included in all things family, extremely talkative and too (!) intelligent. Raja is my 3rd Siamese joy-love. He really does bath Kyle's hair, dedicates minimum of 10-minutes to the act. So cute ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2025 9:36:00 AM

this is a cute one. soupmail for you

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/21/2025 5:46:00 AM

O' Dear CayCay, What a heart warming scene. I am sure your son loves the cat licking him. My sister sent a video of my 92 year old mom asleep in bed with the dog in bed with her and licking her arm. So dear!! I just loved your poem because I loved the unconditional love of animals such as cats and dogs. Spring Blessings, my Dear Friend, Daniel

Hiba Junaid

Date: 3/21/2025 3:29:00 AM

Ah this is a light and fun one! I love cats so, so much. Now I'm not a felinologist or a fellow cat by any means, but in my extremely (un)professional opinion, your cat loves your son. I'd give him/her extra cuddles for that alone. Hugs, Hiba.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/20/2025 9:06:00 PM

This is like 'sweet and soar in one swipe'n'lick!' lol. ~ gw

Paige Hind

Date: 3/20/2025 8:45:00 PM

Aw, sweet! <3