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Cat and Mouse

The cat can chase

The mouse can run

Circling around circles 

 Twisting around and around

Bending this way and that way

Till we reach death

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Poet Destroyer A

April 10, 2016 at 10:22 PM

Mint sha, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Mint Sha

April 11, 2016 at 2:10 AM

It is nice to meet you Linda! thanks so much i took a look at your poetry and i thought is was lovley! dont beat your self up to much! and im just starting my poetic skills i dont think i have any as of the moment. thanks so much -mint

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