Casualty Of Your Cruelty


Unmet expectations damage the dormant psyche,
unkept promises smother the rays of fading hope, 
unkind words tear the lattice of the mangled mind.
My life turns into an urn filled with your ill feeling.

Your senses become the fast spreading wild fire, 
uncontrolled, it boils the blood of intrinsic pride,  
and as it flares up, it burns my gentle demeanor,
its viciousness blazes the bonhomie of bonding chords.  

As the bitterness smoke billows thick and intense,
upset conscience loses the equilibrium and crashes.
Vile breath is charged with the acrimonious ashes,
while the patient facade of restraint you deface.

Your flashing eyes reveal you seethe inside,     
generating an inferno of malice in your heart .     
The twisted tongue spills out words so brutal,
smeared with the toxin of your malicious mind. 

The scruple of sane sagacity turns into ember, 
erupting out of your fuming volcanic conscience,
flows in the spreading smoke of stifling spite,
consuming the remains of reason you lose outright.

With the arcane acumen of a trickster devil,
as sordid silhouette of menace you crawl stealthily
into the quintessence of my being to suck 
the ambrosia of my soul, the casualty of your cruelty.

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Date: 5/6/2025 9:17:00 AM
Congratulations on placing in my contest. I thoroughly enjoyed your write. From "My life turns into an urn filled with your ill feeling, into the quintessence of my being to suck the ambrosia of my soul, the casualty of your cruelty," your poem is utterly fantastic. Brilliant write. Thank you for writing.
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Date: 5/2/2025 4:00:00 AM
its viciousness blazes the bonhomie of bonding chords… Vile breath is charged with the acrimonious ashes… to suck the ambrosia of my soul, the casualty of your cruelty… Wow! Emotive right to the heart!
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Date: 5/1/2025 7:07:00 PM
Wow! An intense poem. Powerfully written. Amazing vocabulary with descriptions. Sounds like a very evil person ! Good luck in the contest :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/1/2025 7:27:00 PM
Thank you for your read and wonderful comments.
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