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For contest sponsored by Sara Jama

Casualty of your cruelty and lack of empathy Is the beginning of your karma journey What you tossed into the universe Comes back full force as blessing or curse Walking in another's shoes Feeling for them as you do for you Empathy a symphony of humanity Put an end to selfish silver vanity Casualty of your cruelty just may be Loved ones you have destined with your deed For what comes around goes around indeed May not hit you but hits relative you see

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Date: 5/13/2025 9:48:00 PM
Karen, this is a powerfully well written poetic brilliance of truth and wisdom. Very well put, and a fave for me.
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Karen Jones
Date: 5/14/2025 1:07:00 AM
I’m honored you fave it Bj! Thanks also for your kind comment!
Date: 5/6/2025 10:27:00 AM
So true! Powerful words -
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Karen Jones
Date: 5/6/2025 11:07:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 5/3/2025 5:37:00 AM
Dear Karen, poetic soul, youv delivered a poem that hits so deep! And i agree with you karma knows and karma always is on time, and those that treat others mindlessly as they want without empathy, or sympathy, they will taste exactly what they serve eventually, for what goes around comes back around! Love the message youv delivered here! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
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Karen Jones
Date: 5/3/2025 12:58:00 PM
You are kind Ink Empress! I appreciate you and love and light returned to you!
Date: 5/3/2025 4:24:00 AM
loved the last stanza, powerful write dear friend!
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Karen Jones
Date: 5/3/2025 12:57:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/1/2025 12:07:00 PM
An eye-opener of a poem, the dire warnings may come about. I find it to be a good job of writing.
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Karen Jones
Date: 5/1/2025 12:27:00 PM
You are kind Hilda! Thank you.
Date: 4/30/2025 1:40:00 PM
Karma hopefully will get people that are so cruel to others!
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/30/2025 9:28:00 PM
Amen!
Date: 4/29/2025 11:39:00 AM
Your "Casualty of your Cruelty" is a powerful write. Oh yes, what comes around goes around. I let God handle things, for He does it the best. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed/lovely day writing away.........
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Karen Jones
Date: 4/29/2025 12:55:00 PM
Paula I appreciate you reading my contest entry. Thanks!

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