Casualty

heavy with time and breath short
   light thankfully dims
to hide landscape scarred
and
    toys broken.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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February 1, 2012 at 11:36 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Jill. Love and best wishes always, Carol
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