Castles of My Heart

In the midst of my desires
Lay the castles of my heart
Dreams are fortified, hopes are restrained
Only faith will prevail and unlock 
The castles of my heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sietesantos Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 12:13 PM
Trisha, I really enjoyed reading this lovely piece! I totally agree with Chris' statement below. Beautifully written and developed with a smooth flow. This deserves a 7! All the best. Pandita
Romano Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 1:08 PM
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this piece :)
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April 24, 2017 at 10:50 AM
Wow, once again, wow. Short but so deep and meaningful. This little piece has a melody all it's own. No build up, no intro, it just sings its message and does so beautifully. Incredible Trisha.
Romano Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 8:34 AM
Thank you very much :)
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