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Castles of My Heart

In the midst of my desires Lay the castles of my heart Dreams are fortified, hopes are restrained Only faith will prevail and unlock The castles of my heart

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/5/2017 12:13:00 PM

Trisha, I really enjoyed reading this lovely piece! I totally agree with Chris' statement below. Beautifully written and developed with a smooth flow. This deserves a 7! All the best. Pandita

Trisha Romano
Date: 5/5/2017 1:08:00 PM

Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this piece :)

Chris Green

Date: 4/24/2017 10:50:00 AM

Wow, once again, wow. Short but so deep and meaningful. This little piece has a melody all it's own. No build up, no intro, it just sings its message and does so beautifully. Incredible Trisha.

Trisha Romano
Date: 4/29/2017 8:34:00 AM

Thank you very much :)