Castles of Glass

CASTLES OF GLASS
For centuries man have built them; 
some fall, while others spring up- 
most of their architectural designs are dubious. 

Most people die when they climb up unstable stairs, 
or lean on their thin walls. 
The architects put all the blame on those who built 
the castles, from foundations to roofs. 
Stone castles and limestone castles are too costly 
for the Kings to construct - you see, they need 
to stash extra money for their sweet lifestyles 

Sunrays paint them
With diamond smiles 
Casting rainbow shadows on huts-

At night 
Their roof is the sleepless sky 
With a million flaming eyes-
The stars that illuminate
The dreams of royals 

When time passes by 
Throwing stones 
To reduce the monstrous figures
Into unforgettable fragments 
They remain prominent 
Scars on the forehead 
Of history 

By: Teddy Kimathi and Sarpong Kumankoma
August 9, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 1:20 AM
Wonderful collab Teddy and Sarpong! Congrats on superb win!
Kimathi Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 3:51 PM
Thank you so much Dr. Upma! *^_^*
United Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 11:50 AM
What a lovely take on the castles theme many congrats Teddy and Sarpong:-) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 3:16 PM
We really appreciate your applause Jadazzle! *^_^*
A  Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 8:51 AM
Sarpong, Congratulations on your - Partner up - contest win. **SKAT**
Kimathi Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Thank you so much Skat! *^_^*
Y. Avatar
September 7, 2015 at 11:34 PM
Great collab! Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
Kimathi Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 3:14 PM
Thank you for applauding our work Alexis! *^_^*
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