Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Castles In the Sand

For years we vacationed on Florida's west side
Building castles in the sand like the Chåteau de Versailles
Was proud as punch
Till some kid on it jumped
Thought it funny till momma tanned his backside

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 30, 2019 at 10:58 AM Tee hee, a true story no doubt. ~x Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 30, 2019 at 1:57 PM My grandmother did the same, had a trailer on the west side. xomo Jack Ellison December 30, 2019 at 12:10 PM Vacationed in Florida for 20 years straight! But the story was fantasy!!! We are quite a pair as you say!!! XOXOX