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Green To The Gills Poetry Contest
Sponsor Daniel henry Rogers
5th Place

 

Form IV — Séadna  (SHAY-dnah)

Lyrate=leaf

A popular figure in Irish lore

The Pirate Queen Grace O’Malley

Tiers= 1 syllable PS syllable counts it as 2

Castles And Pirate Queens -Form IV

Earthen motte mounds and bailey burg 
Sludge strongholds severed for siege
Norman castles cut of stone surge       
Vowed vassals, the lords of liege

Round refuge tower of ashlar                                        
Lured strums of Celtic cither
While they tend to tiers of mortar 
Howling high waters hither  

Gemlike blades grassy shades of green
Sailing seas beckon smartly                            
Hair to partly pare ployed the teen  
Pirate Queen awaits Bartley                         

Homeland hush weave no words but mum                        
Forum flouters of gainsay
Dark Lady of Doona they hum
Legend of the Blacksod Bay                                             

Fortress chieftain forges her case  
Ní Grace unbowed by Bingham   
Royalty rises face to face 
Let them lie Ó Máille clan   

Lyrate luck of her Irish pride
Aside vassal villeins sought                                      
Herstory harmonized resides,
‘pon castles cloaked earthen motte
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 1:13 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun ~ write/story write again. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Anaya Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 1:22 PM
Tyvm, Paula! Congrats on your win as well! Ours were 100% human! ;)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 1:21 PM
What a creative/fun ~ write/story you have here with great pictures.. Love It... Have a fun day writing away..........
Anaya Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 1:41 PM
Tyvm, Paula! I enjoyed working on the very Irish form & I don't expect poets to know the Irish history of the Pirate Queen, tho very interesting. :)
Rodgers Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 12:08 PM
Dear Anaya, You’ve brought Grace O’Malley to life with real grit and grace. The imagery of the 'gemlike blades' against the 'sludge strongholds' is striking. A wonderful blend of history and heart. Blessings, Daniel
Anaya Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 1:35 PM
Daniel, 'twas a difficult form to perform, yet the research I did on medieval castles was fulfilling to the brim! (lol) I think I had my share of Irish, Scot, & English history! Tyvm, dearest poet I know I missed something in this form, but worth a million minutes more, I'd give ~ Spring blessings & smiles
Narain Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 10:53 AM
Nice poem Anaya. Pictures are great too.
Anaya Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 1:30 PM
Tyvm, Jay! Grateful
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