Castles




In the old days
castles were built from sturdy solid rock 
with arrow loops for arrow protection  
and curvilinear structures irregular to the eye.  
They were built with survival in mind 
appearing uniform grey from a distance 
but up close like a monument of  
mosaic  humble rocks. 
Castles were built to outlast civilization 
Protectors of ancient people they were a safe shelter, 
crowning the landscape with their touch of old charm.   
Castles only crumbled when it was their time.

                           the heart of humankind is built like a fortress 
                           it is a military historian that never lets it guard down                               
                           it serves and protects without counting the cost.

So, are we castles or are we crumbling rocks ?
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Goldsmith Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 10:46 AM
I enjoyed reading your "castles" write. I would love to live in a castle. Great last line...  Have a wonderful day writing away...............
Sharma  Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 3:56 AM
What an impeccable and moving write that conveys so much depth! And that questioning in the end really resonated with me as I've tasted both, the castles and the crumbling rocks within me... So artistically you've expressed philosophical dimensions in a very profound manner. I absolutely loved reading this experience of immersing myself in the rich wisdom of your words once again, after a long time, dear Rose ~ I hope you've been doing well! Sending best wishes & love :) this is a fav for me!
Empress Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 2:08 PM
Im both, castles and crumbling rocks. What a deeply moving and profound write which emanates a touch of philosophy too! So much depth in your words as always sacred rose! Pleasure reading this one! Very descriptive and original! Sending you light always
Rose  Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 3:51 PM
Oh beautiful soul how much my heart gladden each time I read a comment from you, Ink, you are one of a kind, un-comparable to any other. Glad God made you unique. Love
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