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Castles

In the old days castles were built from sturdy solid rock with arrow loops for arrow protection and curvilinear structures irregular to the eye. They were built with survival in mind appearing uniform grey from a distance but up close like a monument of mosaic humble rocks. Castles were built to outlast civilization Protectors of ancient people they were a safe shelter, crowning the landscape with their touch of old charm. Castles only crumbled when it was their time. the heart of humankind is built like a fortress it is a military historian that never lets it guard down it serves and protects without counting the cost. So, are we castles or are we crumbling rocks ?

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Date: 10/1/2024 10:46:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "castles" write. I would love to live in a castle. Great last line...  Have a wonderful day writing away...............
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Date: 9/30/2024 3:56:00 AM
What an impeccable and moving write that conveys so much depth! And that questioning in the end really resonated with me as I've tasted both, the castles and the crumbling rocks within me... So artistically you've expressed philosophical dimensions in a very profound manner. I absolutely loved reading this experience of immersing myself in the rich wisdom of your words once again, after a long time, dear Rose ~ I hope you've been doing well! Sending best wishes & love :) this is a fav for me!
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Date: 9/28/2024 2:08:00 PM
Im both, castles and crumbling rocks. What a deeply moving and profound write which emanates a touch of philosophy too! So much depth in your words as always sacred rose! Pleasure reading this one! Very descriptive and original! Sending you light always
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Date: 9/29/2024 3:51:00 PM
Oh beautiful soul how much my heart gladden each time I read a comment from you, Ink, you are one of a kind, un-comparable to any other. Glad God made you unique. Love

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