Castle On a Hill

Can you see that, there's a castle on that hill!
A few seconds ago, it wasn't there, why, am I dreaming?
Sincere I am in my statement, and I am not drunk!
Tiny it does from here, but look, it does seem to be a grand castle 
Let's go, yes, let's do go and see what it is all about
Exceptional! Have you ever seen such lavish furniture and the food, hmm, so tasty

Other than me and you, I wonder who does live here, who does be the owner
Normally, he should have made himself seen and heard by now

As it is, a magic castle it does seem to be, see the pictures on the wall, they blink!

Hey, it's late, we should make a move to leave, we'll come back tomorrow
Indeed, the time was already six, but when we opened the door
Lo! We found ourselves not in our country, not even on Earth
Living shall you be, said a warm voice, with me here, in my time travelling castle!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 1, 2016 at 5:57 PM
Hi A G Congratulations on your castle on a hill win... love Linda
Johnson Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 1:27 PM
What an intriguing tale. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Devnath  Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Congrats on your great win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Negron Flores Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Congratulations Anoucheka on the placement of the contest.
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