Castle On a Hill

She declared her undying love for him,
As he rode his horse into the far and distant land,
“The battle will be won, I will conquer the enemy,
Return and marry”
She ran to the top of the castle's highest tower, 
And watched him as he faded into the distance,
Her spirit would never rest until his return,
Tears fell down her face, she would wait for eternity,
The castle was her fortress her safe tower on the hill
She waited and waited, months and months but no return,
Her white wedding gown was ready and waiting,
But where was her groom, 
She sang songs as she waited,
Singing of her undying love for him and his safe return,
Her music could be heard throughout the castle,
Even to this very day her sadness sings
As she awaits the return of her love,
The sweetness of her voice can be heard,
For eternity she said she would wait,
Forever she said!
Until his return,
The castle still remains empty but just a ruin,
Singing can be heard even from a distance,
Calling for her love.

21/04/2016

For contest sponsor 
Nayda Ivette Negron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 1, 2016 at 5:52 PM
Wendy, Congratulations on your castle on a hill win... love Linda
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May 4, 2016 at 1:02 PM
Thank you Poet xxx
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April 28, 2016 at 9:43 AM
Congrats Wendy to win on wonderful poem. Best wishes always
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April 29, 2016 at 3:07 AM
Thank you Anisha xxx nice to meet you xxx
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April 27, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Such a romantic castle write, Wendy. Congrats on placing.
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April 29, 2016 at 3:06 AM
Thank you Lin what placement was it I cannot access anything on page xxxx
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April 27, 2016 at 12:44 PM
Congratulations Wendy on the placement of the contest.
Rycroft Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 3:16 PM
Thank you did not know about the placement cheers xxxx
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April 21, 2016 at 4:28 PM
A perfect entry, shall I congratulate you now?? Well done!
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April 23, 2016 at 3:21 AM
Thank you so much Richard, very kind of you, nice to meet you xxxxx
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