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Castle In the Sky

MOUNTAIN SKIES I want to feel the mountain top. Kicking my last shadow to a complete stop. Swallowing the clouds in the sky No one to get me down from this mountain high A shallow grave I dug, when I feel the need to hide A danger zone, where all UFO's collide Now, I found a sweet place, when no one is around High on this mountain, hidden in this castle, I cannot be found. Watching all that slithers from top to ground. The smile you once put on my face, Is now lost somewhere in the mountain trace Finding myself paranoid without truly amazing grace. This out of balanced place, is drying up my cries A boundary, beyond the castles and mountain of lies One cherished memory of your hazel eyes Somewhere near heaven's broken walls No one but God, can hear my calls My pain flows above mountain waterfalls. After trips, I have fallen down Inside I feel as if only I own this ghost Castle town No need to save me, from the moat when I drown Just one last AIR BALLOON RIDE Beyond the castle on every mountainside A kiss of death sealed up high Far away from what I use to call, Cloud Nine ~Finding A New Castle In The Sky~ By;-)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/4/2016 11:16:00 PM
i like it **SKAT**
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Date: 12/6/2013 6:49:00 PM
Ok dear friend wow what can i say, their is a real saddness here but it has a calling to it. an echoing of for help in the lines it makes me want to hung the person this is about and say their are other ways to deal with things and your not alone in this great big world. cheri
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Date: 7/4/2013 7:52:00 AM
Hi Linda, I have written a poem inspired by SKAT's Mountain drop poem and she directed me too yours. As always you are the master of expression.
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Date: 3/5/2013 1:40:00 PM
Kind of painful...kind of blissful...great lines here, PD
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Date: 12/6/2012 10:03:00 PM
PD, I just now saw you asking if I was from Canada. Did you forget I am a Utah girl? haha. you silly!
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Date: 5/5/2011 11:05:00 AM
a very creative piece. thank you for reading a rose fell and for your comment.
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Date: 5/3/2011 2:47:00 PM
D. we have to get you a holiday or out to have some fun , take your better half out danceing . You have a wonderful imagination .Great poem. Anne
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Date: 12/26/2010 10:03:00 AM
emotions so high, they take you to the peak of a mountain side. planning out your suicide can be a scary thought. but think about the effects after upon the one your missing. amazing write, as always Sid. . ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 12/23/2010 5:47:00 PM
Interesting work..I hope just a topic and not really suicidal thoughts..Those mountain top experiences are great but we always have to come back down in the valley...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..I was delighted that you stopped by, read and found something that you could take from my work "Dad The Last Snowflake" and that you could enjoy...Sara
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Date: 12/23/2010 7:08:00 AM
Just returning here to say, glad to see you back. Soupmail me sometime and tell me what's been goingon. I just know I can't keep up with you at Soup. haha. My mom is visiting and I don't even have time for blogs. hahaha. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/23/2010 3:34:00 AM
Hi P.D., awesome write! So fille with emotions! Thank you for commenting "Early Fog". I was very busy with other things recently. Wish you a Merry Christmas and a happy and healthy New Year...Tc...Gert
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Date: 12/22/2010 6:08:00 PM
I'm hoping our Souper friend P D is not feeling any little bit of this darkness........just writing an expression of imagination. We are all caring and loving friends here, and you are usually one who makes me smile. This is an excellent piece, however. PS.........your kindness is always so appreciated PD. Thank you always for the friendship and support! Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/21/2010 5:36:00 AM
Been there...DAMN this was awesome!
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Date: 12/19/2010 4:06:00 AM
which poet is Sydney? PD? you can mail me if you wish....
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Date: 12/18/2010 4:42:00 PM
Rejection--Ouch!! Many have experienced this despair that you capture so well. I would also like to thank you for your comment last week. Hazel eyes are very seductive, but it probably wouldn't have worked out in the long run. Good luck with your quest! I am old and wise, and you can contact me any time. I know how you feel, and it isn't fun.
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Date: 12/18/2010 4:39:00 PM
Thanks PD.... It's more fun keeping you as a friend than alienating you with hurtful words...thanks for understanding....I dig this poem....oh, to fly away sometimes....jimbo
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Date: 12/16/2010 9:16:00 AM
A very intense write you have here P.D. Really speaks to my soul. Conveys the despair one can feel at times extremely well. Thanks so much for sharing! Have a gloriously blessed day~Mary
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Date: 12/15/2010 9:54:00 PM
Oh, my, this is very heartfelt, P.D. and I sense you are really feeling this. soupmail for ya
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Date: 12/14/2010 11:10:00 PM
Such feeling and emotion
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Date: 12/13/2010 6:49:00 PM
love your honesty and heartfelt anguish. Thanksfor the good words of praise for my poem.
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Date: 12/13/2010 11:23:00 AM
If we overlook the gloomy part of this Poem, it's a Gem of a Poem my friend. So intense, so lovely with so much of imaginations and melody. Great write and a unique one as well. Love and best wishes..Ravindra
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Date: 12/13/2010 11:17:00 AM
My dear friend I have found your Poem extraordinary as for as the writing skill is concerned, but it shows a gloomy and dark side as well, where I see a different PD. Are you OK my friend? I would always prefer to see the original PD with her bold and strong writings full of confidence and fighting skills. I have placed a new poem. Hope you would like it. Love and best wishes for enjoying the beautiful season of Christmas festival....Ravindra...PD
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Date: 12/12/2010 9:57:00 AM
I hope you don't have these kind of suicidal thoughts, pd. You write is full of 'adrenaline':) Hugs, Emilia:)
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Date: 12/12/2010 8:27:00 AM
Missing u P.D. my BFF... please get in touch and let me know u are OK my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 12/11/2010 5:52:00 PM
is there silver and gold on that mountain of madness? great write
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