Castle in the Air

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Castle in the Air

No other country where I've been seems half so fair,
It's the land where I, in childhood, built my castles in the air.
James Kay Glasgow

 Castle in the Air
 
Can I see my Castle in the Air?
 No! Unlike a stone chateaux
it is a vision of rainbow light
floating on cloud meadows
Its four  small words,
‘Castle in the air.'
 fashioned from wide dreams
 
I imagine vines from
enchanted woods, climb the walls
deep, green precious leaves.
Bright violets fill the undergrowth
in orchards of mist
 
Windows reflect infinity-
Deep puzzles of beginning and end
Expectation gleams on gold spires

 I can only ask for myth

For Castles in the Air Contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 1/2/2017 10:58:00 PM
Does it have a porch swing? Mine is a cloud or two over:) Dreamy write, SuZ.
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Date: 1/3/2017 6:51:00 AM
Nothing like a porch swing. I will definitly add one overlooking the sunset side LOL. SuZ
Date: 11/29/2016 11:47:00 AM
SOUNDS LIKE THE PLACE DREAMS ARE MADE OF GIVES A SENSE OF LONGING LIKE YOUR WRITE THNKYOU FOR COMENTS ON MIN E NOT BEEN ON HERE FOR QUITE A WHILE AS DEALING WITH PERSONAL ISSUES THOUGH BACK ON NOW WITH NHEW WRITE AND WHEN GOT TIME WILL B PUTTING MORE ON HERE X
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Date: 11/16/2016 8:23:00 AM
What an enchanting poem dearest, Suzanne! Hope all your dreams come true! A seven!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/3/2017 6:59:00 AM
Nice to see you, Demetrios: Dreams keep passions for living alive. Take care, SuZ