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Castle In the Air

No other country where I've been seems half so fair, It's the land where I, in childhood, built my castles in the air. James Kay Glasgow Castle in the Air Can I see my Castle in the Air? No! Unlike a stone chateaux it is a vision of rainbow light floating on cloud meadows Its four small words, ‘Castle in the air.' fashioned from wide dreams I imagine vines from enchanted woods, climb the walls deep, green precious leaves. Bright violets fill the undergrowth in orchards of mist Windows reflect infinity- Deep puzzles of beginning and end Expectation gleams on gold spires I can only ask for myth For Castles in the Air Contest.

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Date: 6/2/2021 10:11:00 PM
Charming poem, SuZ.
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Date: 3/29/2018 2:24:00 AM
Have you got a step ladder, just in case the vision clouds temporarily?
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/29/2018 6:18:00 AM
I’ll throw a rope ladder down for you, Kai: Visit often and bring friends. SuZ
Date: 1/2/2017 10:58:00 PM
Does it have a porch swing? Mine is a cloud or two over:) Dreamy write, SuZ.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/3/2017 6:51:00 AM
Nothing like a porch swing. I will definitly add one overlooking the sunset side LOL. SuZ
Date: 11/29/2016 11:47:00 AM
SOUNDS LIKE THE PLACE DREAMS ARE MADE OF GIVES A SENSE OF LONGING LIKE YOUR WRITE THNKYOU FOR COMENTS ON MIN E NOT BEEN ON HERE FOR QUITE A WHILE AS DEALING WITH PERSONAL ISSUES THOUGH BACK ON NOW WITH NHEW WRITE AND WHEN GOT TIME WILL B PUTTING MORE ON HERE X
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Date: 11/16/2016 8:23:00 AM
What an enchanting poem dearest, Suzanne! Hope all your dreams come true! A seven!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/3/2017 6:59:00 AM
Nice to see you, Demetrios: Dreams keep passions for living alive. Take care, SuZ

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