Castle In the Air

No other country where I've been seems half so fair,
It's the land where I, in childhood, built my castles in the air.
James Kay Glasgow

 Castle in the Air
 
Can I see my Castle in the Air?
 No! Unlike a stone chateaux
it is a vision of rainbow light
floating on cloud meadows
Its four  small words,
‘Castle in the air.'
 fashioned from wide dreams
 
I imagine vines from
enchanted woods, climb the walls
deep, green precious leaves.
Bright violets fill the undergrowth
in orchards of mist
 
Windows reflect infinity-
Deep puzzles of beginning and end
Expectation gleams on gold spires

 I can only ask for myth

For Castles in the Air Contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 10:11 PM
Charming poem, SuZ.
Neumann Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 2:24 AM
Have you got a step ladder, just in case the vision clouds temporarily?
Delaney Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 6:18 AM
I’ll throw a rope ladder down for you, Kai: Visit often and bring friends. SuZ
Turner Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 10:58 PM
Does it have a porch swing? Mine is a cloud or two over:) Dreamy write, SuZ.
Delaney Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 6:51 AM
Nothing like a porch swing. I will definitly add one overlooking the sunset side LOL. SuZ
Scott Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 11:47 AM
SOUNDS LIKE THE PLACE DREAMS ARE MADE OF GIVES A SENSE OF LONGING LIKE YOUR WRITE THNKYOU FOR COMENTS ON MIN E NOT BEEN ON HERE FOR QUITE A WHILE AS DEALING WITH PERSONAL ISSUES THOUGH BACK ON NOW WITH NHEW WRITE AND WHEN GOT TIME WILL B PUTTING MORE ON HERE X
Trifiatis Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 8:23 AM
What an enchanting poem dearest, Suzanne! Hope all your dreams come true! A seven!
Delaney Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 6:59 AM
Nice to see you, Demetrios: Dreams keep passions for living alive. Take care, SuZ
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