JC Brul Poet Haiku

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For Brian Strand's 1394 Poetry Contest 29 June 2025

castle hiku

~       ~      ~       ~     ~
        ^        ^         ~       ~
\  _/   \ _ /   \         
 |   | U |    | U |           towers stretch to sky
-    ------    ---''--       arms praising the Almighty ~
  |   | U |   | U |            worship in silence 
***  -----    *** \   ~   ~ 
      /                     \~  ~    ~

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Susan Ashley July 9, 2025 at 10:29 AM Dear JCB, your haiku is beautiful in both verse and shape. Great imagery, my creative poet friend! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues July 8, 2025 at 1:11 PM How beautiful! Cool poetry! Congrats!

Ghairo Daniels July 7, 2025 at 10:04 PM Very Beautiful, JBC. Lovely depiction of message. Congrats. X.

Andrea Dietrich July 7, 2025 at 5:19 PM Big congrats. You deserve it

Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2025 at 8:48 PM Hope you entered this finally. It's outstanding. Even if a poem is read by the judge, you can go to your contest area and remove it as a submission. Did you know that? I only learned it a year ago!

Valsa George July 3, 2025 at 5:50 AM You are proving over and again that you are a master of shape haikus. This is so very creative, dear friend. All the Best.

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2025 at 12:17 AM This is wonderful. Should go in the new haiku contest JC Brul July 2, 2025 at 2:46 AM I've entered the wrong poem, huhuhu, same title.

Sally Eslinger June 30, 2025 at 7:50 AM Hello JCB, I meet you in reading this haiku, directed here after reading a comment you made to dear Ink Empress. This haiku touched me alot. I am also a visual artist, in process of posting my work on FineArtAmerica. My immediate response here was, “Yes & the haiku here imports a picture worth 1,000 words…”

Paula Goldsmith June 29, 2025 at 1:29 PM What a fun read and creative write. This must have taken you along time to do. Great Job... "Good Luck" A winner to me... Have a blessed day writing away............