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castle hiku

~       ~      ~       ~     ~
        ^        ^         ~       ~
\  _/   \ _ /   \         
 |   | U |    | U |           towers stretch to sky
-    ------    ---''--       arms praising the Almighty ~
  |   | U |   | U |            worship in silence 
***  -----    *** \   ~   ~ 
      /                     \~  ~    ~

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Susan Ashley Date: 7/9/2025 10:29:00 AM Dear JCB, your haiku is beautiful in both verse and shape. Great imagery, my creative poet friend! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/8/2025 1:11:00 PM How beautiful! Cool poetry! Congrats! Login to Reply

Ghairo Daniels Date: 7/7/2025 10:04:00 PM Very Beautiful, JBC. Lovely depiction of message. Congrats. X. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/7/2025 5:19:00 PM Big congrats. You deserve it Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/3/2025 8:48:00 PM Hope you entered this finally. It's outstanding. Even if a poem is read by the judge, you can go to your contest area and remove it as a submission. Did you know that? I only learned it a year ago! Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 7/3/2025 5:50:00 AM You are proving over and again that you are a master of shape haikus. This is so very creative, dear friend. All the Best. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/2/2025 12:17:00 AM This is wonderful. Should go in the new haiku contest Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 7/2/2025 2:46:00 AM I've entered the wrong poem, huhuhu, same title.

Sally Eslinger Date: 6/30/2025 7:50:00 AM Hello JCB, I meet you in reading this haiku, directed here after reading a comment you made to dear Ink Empress. This haiku touched me alot. I am also a visual artist, in process of posting my work on FineArtAmerica. My immediate response here was, “Yes & the haiku here imports a picture worth 1,000 words…” Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/29/2025 1:29:00 PM What a fun read and creative write. This must have taken you along time to do. Great Job... "Good Luck" A winner to me... Have a blessed day writing away............ Login to Reply