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For Brian Strand's 1394 Poetry Contest 29 June 2025

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ^ ^ ~ ~ \ _/ \ _ / \ | | U | | U | towers stretch to sky - ------ ---''-- arms praising the Almighty ~ | | U | | U | worship in silence *** ----- *** \ ~ ~ / \~ ~ ~

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Susan Ashley

Date: 7/9/2025 10:29:00 AM

Dear JCB, your haiku is beautiful in both verse and shape. Great imagery, my creative poet friend! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/8/2025 1:11:00 PM

How beautiful! Cool poetry! Congrats!

Ghairo Daniels

Date: 7/7/2025 10:04:00 PM

Very Beautiful, JBC. Lovely depiction of message. Congrats. X.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2025 5:19:00 PM

Big congrats. You deserve it

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2025 8:48:00 PM

Hope you entered this finally. It's outstanding. Even if a poem is read by the judge, you can go to your contest area and remove it as a submission. Did you know that? I only learned it a year ago!

Valsa George

Date: 7/3/2025 5:50:00 AM

You are proving over and again that you are a master of shape haikus. This is so very creative, dear friend. All the Best.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2025 12:17:00 AM

This is wonderful. Should go in the new haiku contest

JCB Brul
Date: 7/2/2025 2:46:00 AM

I've entered the wrong poem, huhuhu, same title.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 6/30/2025 7:50:00 AM

Hello JCB, I meet you in reading this haiku, directed here after reading a comment you made to dear Ink Empress. This haiku touched me alot. I am also a visual artist, in process of posting my work on FineArtAmerica. My immediate response here was, “Yes & the haiku here imports a picture worth 1,000 words…”

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/29/2025 1:29:00 PM

What a fun read and creative write. This must have taken you along time to do. Great Job... "Good Luck" A winner to me... Have a blessed day writing away............