Casting Stuff On the Waters

He cast a crouton on the water
Watched it sog upon the swell
What came back was lava bread
And Chelsea buns as well

She threw in an expensive cake
‘Twas softer than a futon
But what came back upon the waves
Was just a soggy crouton

© Gail Foster 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2016 at 4:55 PM
this is Pissa.....sitting here laughing and not sure why. .... it is just funny....thanks for the laugh
Foster Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 7:02 PM
Oh, thanks for laughing, I do like to make people laugh. I chuckled far too much writing it. All the best to you.
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