Casting

The sun castest its light
Through the thick forest
Giving life to all
Causing the mist to rise

Creating a scene of muted
Greens and yellows
Like a canvas painted 
By an impressionistic fellow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 27, 2009 at 5:08 AM
Sara, Thank God for the sun that not only casts life giving light, but enlightens the heart, soul, and mind as well. Very nice write. Happy New Year, soon. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 10:21 AM
This is a beautiful write Sarah i dont know why but i love the title. like a canvas painted ses it all as this is a great work of art truely great write
Dufresne Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 8:40 AM
I love this one Sara. i like especially the way you brought it together so masterfully in the last two lines.. That really completed the picture in my mind. Looks like you've got the magic pen today. Yup, this one gotta go into my favs.-Robert
Fraser Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 8:35 AM
Impressive piece Sara >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 5:54 AM
Lovely visual Sara and so looking forward to seeing the sun again after our gloomy weather here... your poem has brought sunshine this Saturday morning... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie.. SOUP MAIL REPLY...
Nutter Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 4:38 AM
I like this short imaginative and visual piece. Keep that crreative pen flowing.
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