castaway

He laid on the beach
Soft surf washing his feet
A red plastic cup clutched in his hand
Sun glistening off his salt coated cheeks
Two crabs walking the beach
Stopped and shook their claws
A shark fin cut a V in the shallows
Waiting for the tide to come in
Seagulls stole fries at the hot dog stand
He would awaken sun burnt and hung over
Claiming he had fallen overboard
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Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 8:33 PM
An 'Admiral Effort,' here, Sailor.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 5:17 PM
like the twist of mystery to this poem...is it for the 'beach' contest? if so best wishes with the contest...wishing you well
M  Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 6:10 AM
Hey John…..l really like this poem …it has a mystery to it…..’Claiming he had fallen overboard’ So, please tell me John…how did he get there? I need to know haha! Debx
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