Castaway

Alone
At some random airport
In a remote desolate place
Somewhere on some map
Stranded all night long

With nothing to see
Time stopped still
Idle on my hands
Hours stretched

Nothing to do
Sit and wait
And face
My own
Anxiety            



AP: 3rd place 2026, Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 4:48 PM
I feel I have experienced this.
Kiser Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 12:38 PM
That's about the size of it; well described experience.
Neumann Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 4:13 AM
I love airports, but I get your feeling ...
Gauthier Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 10:57 AM
I love your attitude, Kai. You sound like you live in the moment. Thanks for your visit and comment.
Somadas Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 11:32 PM
Alone is better for making our minds wander in imagination... You made the time fruitful by composing this..
Gauthier Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 11:42 PM
Thanks, Jenish. Most appreciated.
Adams Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 6:13 PM
Yikes. I have been there. If not fiction I hope you are on your way soon :) hugs
Gauthier Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 11:41 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visits and comments, Sandra.
Adams Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 6:52 PM
oh definitely especially after hours when all their little shops and things are shut down...
Gauthier Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 6:18 PM
LOL. There is room for improvement for making airports more interesting.
Sands Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 4:57 PM
Well written, you have shown this well and led the reader to feel it too :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 6:18 PM
Thanks, Heidi. Most appreciated.
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