Castanets Blazing

Castanets blazing, she twists the dress in dangerous ways
Feeling eyes on her, she is compelled to be a bit more provocative
I keep silent that she is my mother
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 1:03 PM
LOL at the end. When my mom and dad would play tennis she would jokingly say (as she had on her cute tennis outfit) don’t tell anyone that I’m your mother. Mom was adorable in so many ways. :) Miss her!
Krutsinger Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 7:33 PM
I love that! That is so great!
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