Cast It Wide

A grand adventure is afoot,
awaiting those who won’t stay put,
I must confide.

A world is there for you to greet,
but there’s no way for you to meet
if you’re inside.

So what, child, are you waiting for?
Get off the couch; grab firm the door,
and cast it wide!

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A Pie Quebrado is an old Spanish form with a couplet of 8 syllable lines and a 4 syllable tail
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 12:32 PM
One doesn't know until one steps outside. Lovely Jeff!
Wolf Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 7:07 PM
Yes! Tear that door off of its hinges, Mr. Gorbachev!! ~ R.R.
Kyser Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 7:20 PM
Thanks, friend
Elless Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 8:14 AM
Jeff, it's out there waiting. Can't change, if you stay the same. Great Advice. Keep Rolling.
Turner Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 8:00 AM
A most inspiring poem, Jeff. Sounds like excellent advice.
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