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Cast Away

Tomorrow never came And still throughout the deepest of love So divine, a taste of sweetness Thoughts controlled by one mind Hopelessly I'll dream but only for one I love only one I've loved only once Simple minds make powerful love But who shall I love? If love only came once Empty hearts- tasteless thoughts A sweet gesture before we depart Whispers, cries of lust Love stories spoken But love wasn't born for us So my words are vague(inside I'm so cold) I close my thoughts and write with rage Loves a centerfold open and closed A diverse writer For I am poetry And the words bound by love has taken my soul

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Mourning Mist

Date: 8/16/2011 11:34:00 PM

i hope you can take constructive cristism, good poem, believe me, i love the cast away theme you have here..but do you feel the need to mention you are diverse and you are poetry to build the characters ego in the poem..just reminds me of another lady i know is all, her blogs all rant on her greatness..it is two lines that i feel are not needed for being the cast away

Andrew Gissendanner
Date: 8/17/2011 12:39:00 AM

*I'm not saying I'm the best on this site*

Andrew Gissendanner
Date: 8/17/2011 12:38:00 AM

I enjoy constructive cristism and to reply to it, I'm sayin I'm the best on this site and if I believe I'm the best in my mind than I don't see nothing wrong with that. Just showing I'm confident about my poetry. thanks 4 the comment.