Andrew Gissendanner Poet Free verse

Cast Away

Tomorrow never came
And still throughout the deepest of love
So divine, a taste of sweetness 
Thoughts controlled by one mind
Hopelessly I'll dream but only for one
I love only one
I've loved only once
Simple minds make powerful love
But who shall I love?
If love only came once
Empty hearts- tasteless thoughts
A sweet gesture before we depart
Whispers, cries of lust
Love stories spoken 
But love wasn't born for us
So my words are vague(inside I'm so cold)
I close my thoughts and write with rage
Loves a centerfold open and closed
A diverse writer
For I am poetry 
And the words bound by love has taken my soul

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Mourning Mist August 16, 2011 at 11:34 PM i hope you can take constructive cristism, good poem, believe me, i love the cast away theme you have here..but do you feel the need to mention you are diverse and you are poetry to build the characters ego in the poem..just reminds me of another lady i know is all, her blogs all rant on her greatness..it is two lines that i feel are not needed for being the cast away Andrew Gissendanner August 17, 2011 at 12:39 AM *I'm not saying I'm the best on this site* Andrew Gissendanner August 17, 2011 at 12:38 AM I enjoy constructive cristism and to reply to it, I'm sayin I'm the best on this site and if I believe I'm the best in my mind than I don't see nothing wrong with that. Just showing I'm confident about my poetry. thanks 4 the comment.