Cassio Laps Wondrously

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Cassio Laps Wondrously An open porch, gifts spritely legs on all his fours, meows he begs so opens I, a tuna can not be prepared, a stray in tan that came to be for many years a wandering did set in fears yet his return continued on meows are heard, that be his song untimely death outside our door car screeching sound could not ignore near fronts our yard, the roses bloom midst stands a cross neath lies his tomb heartfelt love, receptive wills he laps Heaven's milk, eternally. 2020 August 23 *1st Place* All Pets Go To Heaven ~~Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 8/31/2020 9:32:00 AM

William, congratulations on your win in my All Pets Go To Heaven challenge with this emotional write, a fav for me _Constance

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/31/2020 12:24:00 PM

On behalf of Cassio, thanks for the wondrous placement, share, fave, and again another fine opportunity, Constance, stay well and safe my friend, Aloha! William

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 8/26/2020 7:44:00 AM

Congratulations, William, on the win for this heartfelt, tender poem. I do believe that animals go to heaven... we do see them again.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/26/2020 8:04:00 AM

I am grateful for your kind expressions, Carol, and yes, we will meet again, stay well and Aloha! William

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/25/2020 4:34:00 AM

- A wonderful story, William ... congratulations on your top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/25/2020 7:38:00 AM

Many thanks, Anne-Lise, for your kind words, stay well, Aloha! William

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/24/2020 2:56:00 PM

You gave your Cassio a wonderful life. He knew where to come for food and affection. Congrautlations William on your first place! A heartfelt memory!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/24/2020 3:04:00 PM

Kids long moved on when Cassio passed, they too knew him well, we're all sadden by his loss, grateful for your considerations and accolade, Sam, stay well my friend, Aloha! William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/24/2020 1:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A good story/poem. I love your line, "laps Heaven's milk, eternally." I am sure he is. Enjoy your win and day....................

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/24/2020 2:09:00 PM

Thank you, Paula, for your words of endearment and accolade, stay well my friend, Aloha! William