Notes About The Poem

My Suzette Prime is in response to the second quatrain of Suzette Richard's "Voir Dire on Love" 

"While we’re in the vertiginous first throws of being in love,

it’s advisable to bide one’s time; and not seem overeager.

If only there was a reliable test whereby one could

measure the compatibility of one’s love interest."

Checked by Howmanysyllables.com

Syllables per stanza:  9/6/13/6/5/9/4    12/12     13

Case No 2-3-2026

Indeed, lovers must not rush into
long-term relationships.
Such decisions are to society’s detriment.
As for the assertion 
that no test exists 
to measure compatibility,
I must protest.

I propose the use of personality tests and
astrology charts to show like-mindedness.

Choose head over heart for long-term love relationships.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Buhagiar Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 12:55 AM
Many assert that opposites attract. Yet between lovers, there should also be some compatibility.
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 2:09 PM
there still should be compatibility among opposites who attract. Believe me, I know!
Richards Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 10:07 PM
Hi, Andrea. It was a well thought out response to the chosen quatrain. It is just a pity that it did not adhere to the design principles of Suzette Prime. It is almost a metaphor for playing by the rules in courtships... Su, x
Richards Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 9:25 PM
Thanks for trying, Andrea. The trick in Suzette Prime is the prime number count per line (it is listed at the form description here at PS). No different to counting syllables per line for forms such as Limericks. Better luck next time :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 2:11 PM
It's ok. i knew it wasn't that great. Honestly, I still don't get the rules. I was able to understand what you wanted but at a certain point, I could not quite comprehend all that you really wanted from us. I guess your form is just too difficult for me sometimes.
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 2:06 PM
Well, I think it is a nice one, and interesting theory about relationships and marriage. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 2:22 PM
People rush into things. I wish I had known of certain compatibility tests I learned of since my youth
Narain Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 12:01 PM
the horoscope matching used to be a must in my culture, but no one believes on this anymore.
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 2:26 PM
My horoscope chart explains a LOT about myself. Also I know of certain tests that people should look into even if blinded by love. Passion ends but personality compatibility can keep relationships from ending in disaster.
Empress Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 7:35 AM
Dear sweet andrea Wise words from your talented quill. Hmm i read the last line and thought to myself, yes heart can be a manipulator, but what if the mind is a gaslighter and liar too? So much to think and talk about maybe in our next email session. Haha. Pleasure reading you today! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always! And definitely a fave
Dietrich Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 2:48 PM
Thanks , sweetie.
Rolland Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 4:54 AM
this is so clever, i vote for that test too, but i think, we know a lot of things when we meet the good one of compatibility, thanks for the "smiling"
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 2:27 PM
Thanks, Yann
Crandall Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 8:04 PM
Good idea Andrea - iIn the old days, didn't they have dating services with extensive questionnaires to gauge compatibility. I bet if they did, they were all wrong! I don't think love is something that conforms to any rational analysis - lol.
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 12:36 AM
Check out this book called The Color Code. Best personality test EVER, and it even gives compatibility of the four types and various subtypes (nothing to do with color, just a way to refer to the types)
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2026 at 12:34 AM
yes, I don't know why they stopped that practice. However, I would mean such a test to be used AFTER two people fell in love, just to be sure it would work. I really believe in astrology, and from experience, I know how things work out between the different kinds of signs!
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