Cascading Water

cascading water 

       become one with the sun…

a dappled display
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Brown Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 5:24 AM
Just stopping by today to thank you for all your comments. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Wilma. Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol
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December 19, 2010 at 5:01 AM
Wonderful images through your words Wilma, have a lovely Sunday >> James :)
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December 18, 2010 at 8:28 AM
I can picture this in my mind, Wilma!!! Simply beautiful!! Good luck if this is for a contest, I'm always rushing so I don't hang around a lot here but hopefully, will soon be able to as Christmas break fast approaches. I hope you'll receive your CD on time for your B'Day..the cards were sent separately! Much love, Audrey
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December 17, 2010 at 7:31 AM
pretty discriptions!! Well written!
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 9:31 PM
Rereading your entry. it stands a GREAT chance in the contest, Wilma. And that's no joke! Luv, Andrea
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December 16, 2010 at 8:21 AM
I wanted to add to this write my friend. Noah and I, as well as my 27 yr. ol' son, go out on those sunny rainy days and just love the display of colours a soul can find starring into the heavens...just a beautiful write my dear poet ! much love, james
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December 16, 2010 at 8:18 AM
I love writes that put me in there...this one has done that, a joy to read dear poet ! much love, james
Sweetheart Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 4:54 AM
A wonderful write Wilma on the flowing water contest.. good luck with luv.. and it surely represents the theme in a fantastic way dear friend.... winner spot for sure ..luv..
Poet Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 11:20 AM
Wonderful write Wilma!Felt the presence of flowing water nearby while reading it.-kashinath
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December 15, 2010 at 11:15 AM
A wonderfully beautiful image that you have put in the minds of your readers. Lots of Love, ~Misty~
Brown Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 6:19 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Wilma. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
K. Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 12:38 AM
This sure brings a very beautiful image in my mind, Wilma :) enjoyed reading this :) hoping your day is as pretty as this ;) --hugs nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 10:40 PM
This is gorgeous, Wilma. Things are not good with me. I think my school is gonna close down. I'm very worried. It is gonna hurt us alot. LUv, Andrea
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December 14, 2010 at 7:33 PM
Hey this is so good, just love it Wilma, Harry
Richards Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 3:15 PM
love the 'become one with the sun' line....just wonderful !!!
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December 14, 2010 at 3:09 PM
Your images are like no other... Beautiful scene you create with your fingers on the keys.. love it and into my favs it goes... with from me to you... Michael
Mehta Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 1:48 PM
Nice pen picture creating a beautiful of the sun;s rays falling on the cascading water, Wilma
Devonshire Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 12:08 PM
Your haiku reminds me of the rainbow colors that seem to dance off the waterfalls, Wilma. This must be a sight you see often in your country. Here it is a welcome treat! Very beautiful entry for Rick's contest!! Love, Carolyn
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December 14, 2010 at 11:21 AM
you charm me with this playful 'ku... wishing you well in the contest, wilma! huggs, nette
Roberts Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 11:19 AM
lovely imagery, good luck in the contest Wilma
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