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Beautiful Scars

Cascading Reverie

reverie dawdles
                                           cascading down fount of life
                                irrigate Spring's grace



March 6, 2018

Copyright © Beautiful Scars | Year Posted 2018

naturewaterhaiku

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Gregory Richard Barden

March 8, 2018 at 9:02 AM

Gorgeous Haiku, Luloo ... I must fav this one. Blessings! (I did not place either ... this one should have been high on the list).

March 7, 2018 at 11:28 AM

Very nice, Laura. Just what I think of with haikus - nature.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 6, 2018 at 6:16 PM

There is so much movement! Wonderful haiku Luloo, my best to you! xomo :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 6, 2018 at 1:51 PM

- Beautifully written, Laura - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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