Cascading Emotions

When I look at a Waterfall - 


I see the
forces of nature, strength
of a lovers arms, caressing you

Gentle, strong
cascading emotions,
cleansing the heart of doubts and worries. 

Feeding life
into your soul, charging
your heart with hope and tranquility


I lie in
The foam of contentment
Looking with wonder at natures gift





Penned by Seren Roberts on October 28 2014

Contest: Some form of Crystalline
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 2:40 PM
Excellent job on this challenge Seren. Good Luck I hope you rank high with this entry.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 10:18 AM
I love where you went with this Seren. Great poem. Good luck in the contest.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 8:57 AM
Cascade of emotions wow Seren ! Wonderful write! Gl in contest!
Sivey Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 6:16 AM
I love the "cascading emotions" within your tender write! Your write is full of tranquility and peace, I just loved the great feelings I got out of reading your awesome poem! What an incredible piece my friend! Terrific Work!!
Allison Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 5:03 AM
wonderful take on the theme Seren Good luck in the contest:-) hugs janxx
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 1:44 AM
Nice wriiten emotions cascading in poetry form, Seren! GL in the contest! xxx D.
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