Joanna Daniel Poet Rhyme

Cascading Emotions

Wading through cascading emotions, 
I feel within me warring oceans, 
Losing you, love, could cause such turmoil, 
If I had known, your death I'd have foiled, 
Lost that war with time and destiny, 
Now I trudge on in hushed mutiny. 


25th April 2023

For Line Gauthier's "Bite Size Contest No. 62"

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Regina Mcintosh May 2, 2023 at 3:52 PM Lovely write. Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina

Alexis Y. May 2, 2023 at 3:47 PM Hi Jo, You wrote about pain and loss so well in a few words. Congratulations on your HM. Have a great day-Alexis

Victor Buhagiar April 26, 2023 at 2:01 AM Alas we cannot fight death.

Sotto Poet April 25, 2023 at 6:27 PM A beautiful poem and illustration, full of hopeful expectations and emotions. I hope you do well in the contest.

Demetrios Trifiatis April 25, 2023 at 2:54 PM This is a profound poem that deserves recognition, dear Joanna. Excellent work. Be blessed!

Daniel Turner April 25, 2023 at 9:52 AM And now I'm glad I didn't know The way it all would end The way it all would go Our lives are better left to chance I could have missed the pain But I'd have had to miss the dance. These are lyrics to a song called, "the dance". This is what your poem reminded me of Joanna.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 4:06 AM - A deeply sensitive poem, Jo - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs