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Cascading Emotions

Wading through cascading emotions, I feel within me warring oceans, Losing you, love, could cause such turmoil, If I had known, your death I'd have foiled, Lost that war with time and destiny, Now I trudge on in hushed mutiny. 25th April 2023 For Line Gauthier's "Bite Size Contest No. 62"

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/2/2023 3:52:00 PM

Lovely write. Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/2/2023 3:47:00 PM

Hi Jo, You wrote about pain and loss so well in a few words. Congratulations on your HM. Have a great day-Alexis

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/26/2023 2:01:00 AM

Alas we cannot fight death.

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/25/2023 6:27:00 PM

A beautiful poem and illustration, full of hopeful expectations and emotions. I hope you do well in the contest.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/25/2023 2:54:00 PM

This is a profound poem that deserves recognition, dear Joanna. Excellent work. Be blessed!

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/25/2023 9:52:00 AM

And now I'm glad I didn't know The way it all would end The way it all would go Our lives are better left to chance I could have missed the pain But I'd have had to miss the dance. These are lyrics to a song called, "the dance". This is what your poem reminded me of Joanna.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/25/2023 4:06:00 AM

- A deeply sensitive poem, Jo - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs