Cascading Black, Down Her Back

Purple in dress, wows Cascading black, down her back She turns, tanned beauty .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chircop Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 12:12 PM
All the guys are going to envy this vision..Exceellent Haiku!!
Fraser Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 1:57 PM
Thank you Charmaine. A vision I'd like to witness one day, James :) :) hugs :) :)
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 9:42 AM
Oho just imagine!" tanned beauty"..Great haiku. Loved it. God bless James.LOVE..rajat
Fraser Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 2:16 PM
Many thanks Rajat for your kind words, much appreciated, James
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 2:17 AM
affront she stares.... eyes beguiled in hues of joys.... tears sprung from his eyes... // beautiful haiku!
Fraser Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 2:09 PM
Thank you Olive. It's about an image I see of a lovely girl wearing a purple dress, James :)
Nance Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 7:32 PM
Can you get her phone number for me ... :)
Fraser Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 11:21 AM
Nice to see you back here Casarah :) James
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 9:44 AM
Casarah have you got the phone number?
Allison Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 4:55 PM
ooh sensual - lovely imagery James:-) Hugs Jan xx
Fraser Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 5:00 PM
She in Purple, an Image I desire. I think once seen, my heart will be on fire, I hope - James :) xxx
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