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Cascade Hiku

 flowers grow wild
                where water spills from green cliffs -
                                                 an   e n d l e s s   spring

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Karen Jones

March 23, 2025 at 10:30 AM

Love this imagery! I can just hear the waterfall!

Paige Hind

March 13, 2025 at 11:00 PM

Indeed! Lovely image!

Duke Beaufort

March 12, 2025 at 6:20 PM

Andrea, reminds me of Hawaii. Short poems like this one do stick with us. Smiles!!

Mike Bayles

March 8, 2025 at 8:05 AM

Wow. This haiku is so alive.

Paula Goldsmith

March 7, 2025 at 8:32 AM

Back again with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your Haiku write again. Have a fun/blessed weekend as you write away..................

Daniel Henry Rodgers

March 7, 2025 at 7:27 AM

Dear Andrea, How could I not love such a beautiful Haiku! Precious! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

David Kavanagh

March 6, 2025 at 12:09 PM

Love your wordplay and duality in the use of (spring) very clever Andrea, a Fave for me, brevity and imagery at its best, cheers David

Paula Goldsmith

March 6, 2025 at 9:34 AM

I enjoyed reading your Haiku write. Have a great and blessed day writing away....................

Oliver Mckeithan

March 6, 2025 at 9:19 AM

Beautiful Haiku Andrea

Sara Kendrick

March 6, 2025 at 8:24 AM

I wonder does that water flow all the time? Thanks for sharing this really lovely one. I enjoyed reading and I love to see waterfalls in real life, but that is mostly a thing of the past. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

March 6, 2025 at 10:09 AM

yes, I think the picture I saw was a waterfall that always was there.

Ink Empress

March 6, 2025 at 7:57 AM

Ah so beautiful sweet andrea Love this! The way you paint imagery is always so impressive! You are truly such a talented poet! I think this will do well! Best wishes . Sending you light