Cascade

Dancing silver mists
Drape like curtains over stone
Proclaiming the Spring
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 9:19 PM
Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, Mark
Halliday Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 4:00 AM
Thanks. I liked yours, too; especially the third one.
Sietesantos Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 11:09 AM
Well done - congratulations on your well-deserved win!
Halliday Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 11:35 AM
Thank you. I thad hought maybe I should have submitted my haiku Seedling instead. It was heavy with alliteration, but didn't really relate to the images. Maybe next time around.
Jackson Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 8:01 AM
Congratulations on your win. Linda x
Halliday Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 11:35 AM
Thanks for taking the time to comment.
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 7:54 AM
Congratulations on your win! Lori
Halliday Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 11:36 AM
Thanks for taking the effort to comment.
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 9:29 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on the HM.
Halliday Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 10:33 PM
Thanks. Maybe I should have entered Seedling instead, but wrote this one first.
Devnath  Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 10:05 PM
Nice haiku on proclaiming the Spring. Beauty of cascade. Loved always, my poet friend, bl
Manassian Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 12:19 PM
Lovely haiku. Loved the dancing mists. Yes, spring is indeed a beautiful tie of the year. You've captured that! :) Thanks for your visit to my work.
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