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Cascade A bubbling spring tenderly, laps its virgins of watered life-giving sources, Reluctantly release its loving hold through gravitational forces, Full of life's vigor enriches the quietude induced to full measure, To utter complete abandon surrender its innocence to elegant pleasure, Outpours its fresh domain in cascading affluents of absolute grandeur, Alighting receptive hearts in droplet sprays of grace quenching the amour. 2019 September 08 *2nd Place* Picturesque Rhyme ~~Eve Roper

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Lonna Blodgett

Date: 9/28/2019 10:14:00 PM

You have a very heartfelt appreciation of nature that pervades your writes. Love it and admire it William. Lonna

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/28/2019 10:40:00 PM

You've my thanks ~ Aloha always William

Constance La France

Date: 9/26/2019 5:01:00 PM

William congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem!

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/26/2019 5:10:00 PM

Appreciate it ~ Aloha always William

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/26/2019 2:35:00 PM

To utter complete abandon...Congratulations on your top podium win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/26/2019 2:40:00 PM

Kind of you ~ Aloha always William

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/26/2019 8:02:00 AM

- A truly amazing picture Eve chose :) - Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem in the contest, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/26/2019 10:10:00 AM

Much Thanks ~ Aloha always William

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/26/2019 12:38:00 AM

Congratulations on this lovely entry winning Second Place William ! It is very deserving of the honor! : ) xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/26/2019 7:43:00 AM

Ah, thanks ~ Aloha always William

Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/25/2019 11:00:00 PM

GREAT. Congrats William. I have also chosen same picture. Blessing

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/26/2019 7:42:00 AM

Thank you ~ Aloha always William

Eve Roper

Date: 9/25/2019 10:49:00 PM

Great poem, William, congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/26/2019 7:41:00 AM

Humbling--THANKS ~ Aloha always William

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/10/2019 2:46:00 AM

Your beautiful write full of imagery is sure to tantalize Eve. Good luck in her contest my friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/10/2019 3:28:00 AM

Thanks -- there are times when my mind process just spills out, jumbled at first, but connectable somehow to near masterpieces -- yet most times it is ordinaire ho-hum jargon run-of-the-mill ~ Aloha always William