William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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Cascade

Cascade

A bubbling spring tenderly,
laps its virgins of watered 
life-giving sources,

Reluctantly release its
loving hold through
gravitational forces,

Full of life's vigor enriches
the quietude induced
to full measure,

To utter complete abandon
surrender its innocence
to elegant pleasure,

Outpours its fresh domain
in cascading affluents
of absolute grandeur,

Alighting receptive hearts
in droplet sprays of grace
quenching the amour.

2019 September 08

*2nd Place*
Picturesque Rhyme
~~Eve Roper

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Lonna Blodgett September 28, 2019 at 10:14 PM You have a very heartfelt appreciation of nature that pervades your writes. Love it and admire it William. Lonna William Kelii Kekaula September 28, 2019 at 10:40 PM You've my thanks ~ Aloha always William

Constance La France September 26, 2019 at 5:01 PM William congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem! William Kelii Kekaula September 26, 2019 at 5:10 PM Appreciate it ~ Aloha always William

Jeanne Mcgee September 26, 2019 at 2:35 PM To utter complete abandon...Congratulations on your top podium win. William Kelii Kekaula September 26, 2019 at 2:40 PM Kind of you ~ Aloha always William

Anne-Lise Andresen September 26, 2019 at 8:02 AM - A truly amazing picture Eve chose :) - Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem in the contest, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) William Kelii Kekaula September 26, 2019 at 10:10 AM Much Thanks ~ Aloha always William

Connie Marcum Wong September 26, 2019 at 12:38 AM Congratulations on this lovely entry winning Second Place William ! It is very deserving of the honor! : ) xxoo William Kelii Kekaula September 26, 2019 at 7:43 AM Ah, thanks ~ Aloha always William

Anisha Dutta September 25, 2019 at 11:00 PM GREAT. Congrats William. I have also chosen same picture. Blessing William Kelii Kekaula September 26, 2019 at 7:42 AM Thank you ~ Aloha always William

Eve Roper September 25, 2019 at 10:49 PM Great poem, William, congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve William Kelii Kekaula September 26, 2019 at 7:41 AM Humbling--THANKS ~ Aloha always William

Caren Krutsinger September 10, 2019 at 2:46 AM Your beautiful write full of imagery is sure to tantalize Eve. Good luck in her contest my friend. William Kelii Kekaula September 10, 2019 at 3:28 AM Thanks -- there are times when my mind process just spills out, jumbled at first, but connectable somehow to near masterpieces -- yet most times it is ordinaire ho-hum jargon run-of-the-mill ~ Aloha always William