Carving a Niche

She sat in silence, whittling wood, Creating magic with her hands, Here she couldn't be misunderstood, Carving charming pieces on stands, Fulfilling customer demands; She carved serenely, working hard, Chipping away those needless bits, Making art out of something marred, This showcased her finesse and wits, She loved her work, wouldn’t call it quits; With this job, she couldn’t make ends meet, But she rose to the occasion, Pouring her heart into each feat With skill and perfect equation, She persevered with persuasion; She had the courage to dream on, Toiling with the sweat of her brow, Soon she saw the glow of the dawn, Her artefacts are famous now, Her diligence paid off and how! 10th March 2022
For Emile Pinet's "Quintain (English)" poetry contest Rhymes checked with www.rhymezone.com
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Date: 3/11/2022 7:15:00 AM
Exquisite poem, Jo. This should do well in the contest. It's worth it if you never give up. Congratulations on becoming the poet you are. Well done, my friend. Bill
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Date: 3/10/2022 5:04:00 PM
When you do what you love to do dear heart, and you do it well sooner or later someone will treasure your endeavors, shine on girl !!
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Date: 3/10/2022 11:48:00 AM
Uplifting, inspiring vibes you convey in this excellent write, Jo. Much enjoyed.
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Date: 3/10/2022 10:54:00 AM
A well written quintain Jo, perfect rhymes. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 3/10/2022 10:29:00 AM
wow, that is really really good, Jo. I think Emile will love it.
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Date: 3/10/2022 7:12:00 AM
Beautifully done, Jo! On my part, I very rarely get to perfect rhymes
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