Cars Slow Down

few leaves fewer tints
birds migrate to southern wind
old cars slowing down



September 9, 2019
A Transition of Seasons Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Note: autumn turns into winter
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Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 5:58 PM
I really enjoyed this, Probir.
Gupta Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 8:10 AM
Much appreciated, Andrea ... Thanks ...
Gondolf Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Nice metaphor, Probir, very well written. Best of luck in the contest. John
Gupta Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 8:46 AM
Thank you, John ...
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