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Carried Away

like a feather that floats on a soft breeze or birds singing songs in the green mesquite like a cloud drifting by on a clear, blue day this feeling I have is carrying me away like the nighttime sky with all its stars the big, full moon that glows from afar like the heart that pounds from the words you say this feeling I have is carrying me away carried away by that look in your eyes didn't take too long for me to realize framed for all to see like a painting by Monet this love for you carries me away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/10/2011 1:21:00 PM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
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Date: 2/10/2011 6:16:00 AM
JB, this is beautiful..It is wonderful when love carries one away..float on :) TAH
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