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Carried Away

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Carried away, on a breeze meant for summer
gathering sights left alone for a while
Spreading my wings up above where shes resting
wandering free in my own empty style

Singing along with a meadowlark choir
landing a branch that is lonely of leaves
Drifting along between maple tree wishes
dreaming in ink filled with words she believes

Floating around on a cloud made of cotton
scanning the earth waiting down there below
Following themes that I know are for certain
dressed in the footprints now left in the snow

Landing so soft from this midday excursion
looking about, seeing nothing at all
Wondering what was my true destination
hard to believe that I didn't just fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 3/3/2020 11:31:00 AM
I found myself been carried away to a world of dreams - ' dreaming in ink filled with wrods she believes' -awesome poetry Chris. Absolutely brilliant. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/3/2020 11:57:00 AM
Thank you so very much Jennifer
Date: 3/2/2020 9:57:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, flows so naturally to whisk me away.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/2/2020 10:12:00 AM
Thank you Juliet!
Date: 2/28/2020 1:14:00 PM
- Lovely written ... as always I get carried away with your poetic dreams, Chris :) - Enjoy the weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/2/2020 10:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise
Date: 2/28/2020 12:47:00 PM
A great read Chris. I really enjoyed it.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/2/2020 10:12:00 AM
Thanks so much Gary.
Date: 2/28/2020 11:29:00 AM
This poem is uplifting and relaxing. I enjoyed this Chris. So nice :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/2/2020 10:11:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi.
Date: 2/27/2020 6:30:00 PM
wondering if you have the same wicked winds we currently have... sigh your poetry is always so pleasing to read... wonderful penning Chris... hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 2/28/2020 7:37:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. Your kindness is a wonderful gift to me. Thank you for sticking by me and supporting my work. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 2/27/2020 6:26:00 PM
Hello Chris, those are some dreams you have had. Peace ,Love , always, Darlene
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Chris Green
Date: 2/28/2020 9:49:00 AM
Sunny and warm here today Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/28/2020 8:22:00 AM
Hello Chris, it has been snowing here for 4 days off and on. What is the weather like where you are? you are welcome, i always enjoy your poetry. Have a nice day. peace and Love to you always.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/28/2020 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Darlene.

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