Carpet of Color

Stalky lupines add a purple fringe
to rugs beneath the lodgepole pine
In tall cool grass, where deer have been
the sun slides down between the limbs 

The blue wild flax,  on slender stems
will bend and bow to every breeze
And sulphured bands of wild buckwheat
in wild array,  will cluster at my feet

Not planned, unintended, still they remain
Untouched by the hoe, and watered by rain
A colored carpet wide and sweeping for my eye
While hiking through the lofty hillside high
Kissed by the sun and tossed by the breeze
Running through clover or wherever they please
The winding path that climbs higher still
Strikes vibrant chords and charms the spirit still
This hillside of carpet, in springtime so mild
Planted by God, and born to be wild






Inspired by Constance's mini contest "Wildflowers"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/4/2010 9:35:00 PM
great job Carrie ... you have placed in several contest and deservedly so. keep up the good work!!!
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Date: 1/29/2010 7:47:00 PM
Simply beautiful, Carrie. I would not have minded placing below this marvel. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/29/2010 12:28:00 PM
Alright then Carrie! Very lovely poem! Congratulations !-Robert
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Date: 1/29/2010 11:51:00 AM
Glad to see your name here in the winning column. So many good poems. How do they choose? Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/29/2010 11:22:00 AM
Carrie, I wish you the best in the contest with this beautiful poem. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/29/2010 8:40:00 AM
AAAAAHHHHHHH....a breath of fresh air...Your descriptions have painted beauty within this man's mind..TAH
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Date: 1/28/2010 8:52:00 PM
How is it I have missed seeing the lupines? I just read Joyce's poem and both of your descriptions make them sound vibrant and amazing to view. Perhaps they don't grow in my area. Very nice entry for the contest, Carrie! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/28/2010 8:32:00 PM
Carrie, I didn't realize that we both chose the lupine to write about. Good luck in the contest. ( do you mean purple?)Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/28/2010 8:10:00 PM
tonic for my soul! is this fine poem! Carrie, gorgeous lines! jimbo
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