Carpet of Color

Stalky lupines add a purple fringe
to rugs beneath the lodgepole pine
In tall cool grass, where deer have been
the sun slides down between the limbs 

The blue wild flax,  on slender stems
will bend and bow to every breeze
And sulphured bands of wild buckwheat
in wild array,  will cluster at my feet

Not planned, unintended, still they remain
Untouched by the hoe, and watered by rain
A colored carpet wide and sweeping for my eye
While hiking through the lofty hillside high
Kissed by the sun and tossed by the breeze
Running through clover or wherever they please
The winding path that climbs higher still
Strikes vibrant chords and charms the spirit still
This hillside of carpet, in springtime so mild
Planted by God, and born to be wild






Inspired by Constance's mini contest "Wildflowers"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Lopez Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 9:35 PM
great job Carrie ... you have placed in several contest and deservedly so. keep up the good work!!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Simply beautiful, Carrie. I would not have minded placing below this marvel. Luv, Andrea
Dufresne Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 12:28 PM
Alright then Carrie! Very lovely poem! Congratulations !-Robert
Johnson Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 11:51 AM
Glad to see your name here in the winning column. So many good poems. How do they choose? Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 11:22 AM
Carrie, I wish you the best in the contest with this beautiful poem. Love, Carol
Hill Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 8:40 AM
AAAAAHHHHHHH....a breath of fresh air...Your descriptions have painted beauty within this man's mind..TAH
Devonshire Avatar
January 28, 2010 at 8:52 PM
How is it I have missed seeing the lupines? I just read Joyce's poem and both of your descriptions make them sound vibrant and amazing to view. Perhaps they don't grow in my area. Very nice entry for the contest, Carrie! Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
January 28, 2010 at 8:32 PM
Carrie, I didn't realize that we both chose the lupine to write about. Good luck in the contest. ( do you mean purple?)Love, Joyce
Goff Avatar
January 28, 2010 at 8:10 PM
tonic for my soul! is this fine poem! Carrie, gorgeous lines! jimbo
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