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Carpenter Bee

You giant animals need my help Pollinating flowers in my care Yet you are rude swat at me To you I have done nothing That deck you built looks so delicious I lay eggs there I am not vicious I sleep all winter buzz all spring I never get a splinter I'm a carpenter bee! 6/14/22 BEE CREATIVE POETRY CONTEST Sponsor Matt Caliri

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Date: 6/18/2022 3:28:00 PM
Yours is so simple AND delightful. BEEutiful.
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/18/2022 6:05:00 PM
Lol at beeutiful and thanks Andrea
Date: 6/17/2022 11:57:00 PM
Beautifully penned Jaren ~ good luck for the contest
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/18/2022 4:59:00 AM
Thank you Unseeking Seeker!
Date: 6/16/2022 5:30:00 AM
That was cute. Best of luck in the contest Karen.
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/16/2022 1:46:00 PM
Thanks a lot Chris!
Date: 6/15/2022 11:16:00 AM
Carpenter bees are best described as, "In your face" as they do not hesitate to confront one eye-to-eye! Plus they are notoriously holey, so enjoy your flight of fancy! Aloha!
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/15/2022 11:43:00 AM
Thanks for reading Rico! lol
Date: 6/15/2022 12:06:00 AM
A good poem, well done.
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/15/2022 12:19:00 AM
You are kind to read it Jeanette. Thanks
Date: 6/14/2022 8:06:00 PM
And I'm an electric eel!... Just kidding. Enjoyed your tale of the carpenter bee, Karen! Thanks, gw
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/15/2022 12:18:00 AM
Wow of all natures critters you would choose an eel? Interesting. Lol Thanks again Gershon.
Date: 6/14/2022 4:21:00 PM
This is charming and entertaining, Karen. I love the last line! :)
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Karen Jones
Date: 6/14/2022 5:32:00 PM
Thanks that contest is fun to write for.

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