Karen Jones Poet Rhyme

Carpenter Bee

You giant animals need my help
Pollinating flowers in my care
Yet you are rude swat at me
To you I have done nothing
That deck you built looks so delicious
I lay eggs there I am not vicious
I sleep all winter buzz all spring
I never get a splinter I'm a carpenter bee!






6/14/22
BEE CREATIVE POETRY CONTEST
Sponsor Matt Caliri

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Andrea Dietrich June 18, 2022 at 3:28 PM Yours is so simple AND delightful. BEEutiful. Karen Jones June 18, 2022 at 6:05 PM Lol at beeutiful and thanks Andrea

Unseeking Seeker June 17, 2022 at 11:57 PM Beautifully penned Jaren ~ good luck for the contest Karen Jones June 18, 2022 at 4:59 AM Thank you Unseeking Seeker!

Chris Green June 16, 2022 at 5:30 AM That was cute. Best of luck in the contest Karen. Karen Jones June 16, 2022 at 1:46 PM Thanks a lot Chris!

Rico Leffanta June 15, 2022 at 11:16 AM Carpenter bees are best described as, "In your face" as they do not hesitate to confront one eye-to-eye! Plus they are notoriously holey, so enjoy your flight of fancy! Aloha! Karen Jones June 15, 2022 at 11:43 AM Thanks for reading Rico! lol

Daisy Meadows June 15, 2022 at 12:06 AM A good poem, well done. Karen Jones June 15, 2022 at 12:19 AM You are kind to read it Jeanette. Thanks

Gershon Wolf June 14, 2022 at 8:06 PM And I'm an electric eel!... Just kidding. Enjoyed your tale of the carpenter bee, Karen! Thanks, gw Karen Jones June 15, 2022 at 12:18 AM Wow of all natures critters you would choose an eel? Interesting. Lol Thanks again Gershon.

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 14, 2022 at 4:21 PM This is charming and entertaining, Karen. I love the last line! :) Karen Jones June 14, 2022 at 5:32 PM Thanks that contest is fun to write for.