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Carpe Noctem

They confine us to the dark, So we will seize the night. Shadows full and beautiful, Full moon and pale starlight. Closing eyes with parting lips, And drawing final breath. Drawing blood and lines of love, Awoken in this death. Pleasure, drowning, lost in you, My skin lays bitten, bare. The sweetest suffocation, I’m loving, lacking air. The moon has left me Lycan, And you're allowed to bite. They confine us to the dark, So we will seize the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/10/2012 3:54:00 PM
and, of course, flow and rhyming!!!
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Date: 5/10/2012 3:53:00 PM
Oooh! A delicious piece, this, full of passionate phrasing and outstanding imagery! Well done, Annie!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/4/2011 10:43:00 AM
I love the flow of this poem~~~Even thou it's a little Spooky :o)
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Date: 12/4/2011 9:03:00 AM
* "OWWW, HOW I LOVE THE BEAUTY IN LOVES MOMENT I FIND * WITHIN THIS PASSION LACED WONDERFUL POEM * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL * BEAUTIFUL ANNIE * YOUR BEAUTIES VISITS MELT MY HEART IN JOY * YESSSS * TO SEIZE THE NIGHT * IN THE EVERLASTING LIGHT OF LOVE * SOOO VERY BEAUTIFUL YOU ARE * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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