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the clock strikes dusk the sun fades away a thousand golden lights blinks set the scene on fire crowds carouse for the merry-go-round that bright crown of the carnival night under that picturesque parasol children clamber up the golden saddles atop alabaster rides galloping through infinity then drums snare with cymbals while clarinets and woodwinds shriek in jubilant symphony laughter jingle as the circle twirls and the colourful world dissolve to a colourless blur

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