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Carousel Ride

the clock strikes dusk the sun fades away a thousand golden lights blinks to set the scene on fire crowds carouse for the merry-go-round that bright crown of the carnival night under that picturesque parasol children clamber up the golden saddles atop alabaster rides galloping through infinity then drums snare with cymbals while clarinets and woodwinds shriek in jubilant symphony laughter jingle as the circle twirls and the colourful world dissolve to a colourless blur
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Liguori Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 5:42 PM
Job well done; you made the placements!
Evangeline Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 4:42 AM
Thank you so much for this contest, Robert!
Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 5:16 PM
Fun and colorful this is. I remember WISHInG they'd go on for infinity. All fair rides end too fast!
Evangeline Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 6:53 PM
Yeah, I wish rides go on longer. But I guess that'd mean less money for the fair owners. Thanks for visiting, Andrea.
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