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Out there in the gadgetry of space lies truth unspoken 
as a robonaut delivers with precision dexterous air tasks 
we  dreamers await  spacefaring races by God's millennium
and explore the starlit mysteries of the great beyond 

With futuristic discoveries will scientists find evidence
of alien civilizations or will they find just a Universal void
from the footage of a comet to journeys towards the Sun
we never tire of searching out galaxies and their mysteries 

Up there in the great unknown space stations ready for dock 
it is a privileged place of research surrounded by innovation 
studies of movements and relative positions of celestial objects
tell us so much about the inner mechanisms, of outer space 

If God is eternal then space  is a sky light carousel, a perpetual room
of wonder, that carries particles of light dispersed across the moon.     

Contest Name: Musings On Space 
January 14, 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 1/14/2021 10:33:00 PM
Love this, Vienna, yes not too far into the future, will man and woman carry on the search for other lives, just hope they treat whom ever they discover, better than their own species. love the poetry..Harry
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Date: 1/15/2021 3:51:00 PM
I pray we learn from our mistakes dear Harry, and treat every alien and human with respect, I for one am glad to be amongst peace makers, Praying for world peace, and heart peace too. Thank you for sharing a comment, be well, keep the Faith.
Date: 1/14/2021 9:24:00 PM
Pixie Day it’s! As I read this your launch of me into outer space actually made me feel like I was levitating the carousel of light felt perfectly true and vivid. A star of a poem. Inspired. Miss you... sally
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Date: 1/15/2021 3:50:00 PM
ah, I love it when I can take you along with me for a ride dear Sally . Glad you enjoyed it, Thank you for stopping by, Blessings.
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