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Fettered beasts circle; journey's end always eludes. Never to run free...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/26/2017 1:52:00 PM
Hi John...finally managed to find a poem of yours which I had not read before! This is a great take on a carousel that is condemned to a never ending journey! Regards // paul
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John Michaels
Date: 1/12/2018 5:01:00 AM
Heh, sorry about that! Glad you found a new one to read. Yes, it's that "never-ending journey" that I wanted to comment on - we're all on that ride and can't get off, no matter how much we may want to. Regards, John.
Date: 2/25/2017 9:12:00 AM
Well John with the title such as this I had to turn the entry. I see perfection and a true pleasure. Well done
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John Michaels
Date: 2/26/2017 9:58:00 AM
I'm glad you liked this one. Thanks so much for stopping by!
Date: 2/12/2017 5:57:00 PM
what a great look at the merry go round!
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John Michaels
Date: 2/13/2017 4:01:00 PM
Many thanks for all your comments! Greatly appreciated.
Date: 2/8/2017 7:54:00 AM
Great haiku with depth and meaning! A-7! Best regards. Pandita
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John Michaels
Date: 2/11/2017 5:07:00 AM
Thanks for the kind comments, Pandita. Much appreciated!
Date: 1/29/2017 1:52:00 PM
Clever!
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John Michaels
Date: 2/1/2017 2:20:00 PM
Thanks! Glad you liked it...

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