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Fettered beasts circle; journey's end always eludes. Never to run free...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Callus Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 1:52 PM
Hi John...finally managed to find a poem of yours which I had not read before! This is a great take on a carousel that is condemned to a never ending journey! Regards // paul
Michaels Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 5:01 AM
Heh, sorry about that! Glad you found a new one to read. Yes, it's that "never-ending journey" that I wanted to comment on - we're all on that ride and can't get off, no matter how much we may want to. Regards, John.
Ricci Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 9:12 AM
Well John with the title such as this I had to turn the entry. I see perfection and a true pleasure. Well done
Michaels Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 9:58 AM
I'm glad you liked this one. Thanks so much for stopping by!
Dietrich Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 5:57 PM
what a great look at the merry go round!
Michaels Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 4:01 PM
Many thanks for all your comments! Greatly appreciated.
Sietesantos Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 7:54 AM
Great haiku with depth and meaning! A-7! Best regards. Pandita
Michaels Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 5:07 AM
Thanks for the kind comments, Pandita. Much appreciated!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 1:52 PM
Clever!
Michaels Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 2:20 PM
Thanks! Glad you liked it...
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