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Is there no way left to go but round? the scenery uncomfortably familiar dizzying remorse exhausted excuses hoarse from screaming, I LOVE YOU! June 9, 2020

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/7/2021 6:38:00 PM

The carousel of love…

P.S. Awtry
Date: 11/7/2021 7:06:00 PM

Yep :) -ps

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 8/22/2021 7:16:00 PM

Great question, PS! God bless you!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 11/7/2021 7:05:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer :) ps

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/25/2021 6:15:00 AM

I see it, I remember it. I once lived it.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 2/28/2021 5:39:00 PM

Ive decided to get off and smile and wave ;)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/16/2020 4:20:00 PM

Fascinating poem, PS,! Thank you Panagiota xo

P.S. Awtry
Date: 6/16/2020 5:18:00 PM

Thank you Panagiota! Thanks for the visit :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/11/2020 9:07:00 AM

Good one...and yes you must go round...

P.S. Awtry
Date: 6/11/2020 10:18:00 AM

You are right! Thank you Arturo :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/9/2020 7:50:00 AM

Love this! Fave :))) xomo

P.S. Awtry
Date: 6/9/2020 8:58:00 AM

Wow! Thank you Maureen! I am very honored <3 -ps

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/9/2020 1:59:00 AM

It is amazing how hard a person will try to keep that feeling of love alive! I loved this P.S. especially your impactful ending! xxoo Blessings

P.S. Awtry
Date: 6/9/2020 8:57:00 AM

Thank you Connie. It is so good to write something after such a dry spell! I’m glad you liked it :) -ps

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 6/9/2020 12:41:00 AM

Nice analogy, great poem!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 6/9/2020 1:03:00 AM

Thank you Timothy! So glad to be writing again. I've missed you all :) ps