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Is there no way left to go but round?
the scenery uncomfortably familiar
dizzying remorse
exhausted excuses
hoarse from screaming,
I LOVE YOU!


June 9, 2020

Copyright © P.S. Awtry | Year Posted 2020

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November 7, 2021 at 6:38 PM

The carousel of love…

November 7, 2021 at 7:06 PM

Yep :) -ps

August 22, 2021 at 7:16 PM

Great question, PS! God bless you!

November 7, 2021 at 7:05 PM

Thank you, Jennifer :) ps

Caren Krutsinger

February 25, 2021 at 6:15 AM

I see it, I remember it. I once lived it.

February 28, 2021 at 5:39 PM

Ive decided to get off and smile and wave ;)

Panagiota Romios

June 16, 2020 at 4:20 PM

Fascinating poem, PS,! Thank you Panagiota xo

June 16, 2020 at 5:18 PM

Thank you Panagiota! Thanks for the visit :)

June 11, 2020 at 9:07 AM

Good one...and yes you must go round...

June 11, 2020 at 10:18 AM

You are right! Thank you Arturo :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 9, 2020 at 7:50 AM

Love this! Fave :))) xomo

June 9, 2020 at 8:58 AM

Wow! Thank you Maureen! I am very honored <3 -ps

Connie Marcum Wong

June 9, 2020 at 1:59 AM

It is amazing how hard a person will try to keep that feeling of love alive! I loved this P.S. especially your impactful ending! xxoo Blessings

June 9, 2020 at 8:57 AM

Thank you Connie. It is so good to write something after such a dry spell! I’m glad you liked it :) -ps

Timothy Mcguire

June 9, 2020 at 12:41 AM

Nice analogy, great poem!

June 9, 2020 at 1:03 AM

Thank you Timothy! So glad to be writing again. I've missed you all :) ps

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